Blurring the Lines of Wrong and Right - Comments

what happened to her???? pleeeeeaaaaasssseeeee??? i neeeed to knoooooow

I read this story a really long time ago and at random times it comes to mind.

I hadn't thought about for a while though and I was just browsing through your Green Day Fics. I think you should definitely continue writing on this one, it's really good and very intriguing.

Bitch....I swear you better at least let me know what happened to her.
Please!

very originall.
i love it.
update soon?
*subscribes*

Please Please Please update this story soon!!!

You cant leave us hanging like this darling! This is too good not to continue. I'm dying to know what happened to Adrienne and if she is really pregnant.

<3

Miss Brightside.:

...Wow.

^^ My thoughts exactly... This is just amazing.. and now I'm dying to know what happened to Adrienne
<3

...Wow.

UGH! cliffhanger Dru??? why?? lol. I want to know what happened to Adrienne.
Please update soon. I LOVE this story!!!!

Bekah <3

I love this story. It's very different, I found it in your journal but I could have sworn I was subscribed. That's weird. Anyway, please continue soon, this story's amazing. You're great writer.

This story has been updated.

“I won’t let the thunder hurt you.” Billie murmured, a hand coming up to stroke his sister’s hair.

“I know.” Adrienne’s arms came around Billie Joe’s neck. “You always take care of me.”

Happy reading!

xoxox
-Dru

This is amazing. I love all your stories ^_^
It's so original and beautifully writen.
*suscribes* It's one of my favourites on here.
=D

xoxo.

OoOoOo you updated!
I thought for sure you'd forget about it.
This is getting good...
I sure as hell hope Adie isn't pregnant..

I really like this story. It's original and very descriptive. I like the fact that it's not moving really fast but not really slow either. I'm sorry I'm not great at quality reviews but I tried...so...yeah. Great story though.

omg, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE post more soon!!!!

Oh my god! Great story! Update soon, please!

I noticed how many people praise your work so I decided to read something other than "What author in their 'right' mind..", and chose this story {I like reading incests}.
I must say I liked the five chapters posted {why'd you stop writing it?}. The plot and characters' states of mind are balanced, but mostly because you seem to describe their feelings through their actions more than narrating about how they feel. I prefer the narration, but I could easily picture the scenes in my head, so I didn't really mind.
The concept's great! For once the girl's younger than the boy, which automatically leads to your story not being all cliche-like.
As long as I'm concerned, you've done an awesome job worth reading!

BillieLovesAdie:

VegasIsMyName:

druscilla; in cali:

Okay.
Thanks for reading.
Leave comments with something more than 'update' or 'it rOcKz'.
Writers appreciate feedback.
Not crappy reviews.
That's mean, I'm mean.
I want real reviews.
Kinda sorry for being mean.
I'm just speaking for every writer out there.
Reviews need content.
Stories need content.
We give you something, give us something in return.
Plzkthx.

Thank you for saying the thing I'd be a bitch for saying.

Ik where your coming from I have writen 8 stories so far and one time i got banned for telling a girl i thought her story was great only it came up a couple of times by accident so i got banned so the owner deletd my stories. but anyway i like your story and telling you i lie it and to update soon isn't bad i get that alot so you shouldn' be upset ^_^

I'm not upset.
I'm clarifying what a good writer considers a good review.

VegasIsMyName:

druscilla; in cali:

Okay.
Thanks for reading.
Leave comments with something more than 'update' or 'it rOcKz'.
Writers appreciate feedback.
Not crappy reviews.
That's mean, I'm mean.
I want real reviews.
Kinda sorry for being mean.
I'm just speaking for every writer out there.
Reviews need content.
Stories need content.
We give you something, give us something in return.
Plzkthx.

Thank you for saying the thing I'd be a bitch for saying.

Ik where your coming from I have writen 8 stories so far and one time i got banned for telling a girl i thought her story was great only it came up a couple of times by accident so i got banned so the owner deletd my stories. but anyway i like your story and telling you i lie it and to update soon isn't bad i get that alot so you shouldn' be upset ^_^

druscilla; in cali:

Okay.
Thanks for reading.
Leave comments with something more than 'update' or 'it rOcKz'.
Writers appreciate feedback.
Not crappy reviews.
That's mean, I'm mean.
I want real reviews.
Kinda sorry for being mean.
I'm just speaking for every writer out there.
Reviews need content.
Stories need content.
We give you something, give us something in return.
Plzkthx.

Thank you for saying the thing I'd be a bitch for saying.