July 12th, 2009 at 09:15pm
I didn't really understand what was going on, but that's only because I haven't read the previous chapters. : p
REVIEWWW!
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But, uhhh..
Ok, I liked it. It was so sad and well written.
There were no spelling errors, which is a thumbs up in my book, and the only grammatical errors were fragments where it actually sounded fine and whatnot.
Some places could have done better with a period ins place of a comma or vice versa, but whatever. Actually, I think there was only one place.
Uhmm, I ttly suck at reviews. >.<
congrats to the winners!
& thank you!
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