Lost My Way, Lost the Light - Comments

Just found this&I'm very excited to see the edited,rewritten version of it!

This is really good. I feels so bad for her. I couldn't imagine being blind.
Please continue this. Or tell me if you publish it. Thanks.

So, I just found this, but I loooove it and I hope you keep updating ad maybe eevn get this published someday. i know I'd buy it(:

awwww.
I loved it.
I want to read more.
more soon?

I'm still interested, it's a great story.

ireallylovethis
im still interested in it
i agree with AliaM if you make the chapters a bit longer it could make a huge differance (:

I am still interested, If you would like to get this published someday, might i suggest making the chapters a bit more longer. I mean they are good as it is but it seems very brief and doesn't go a whole lot into emotions enough. Being blind is a huge deal, especially if you were able to see before. When I read this story, I don't recieve that sort of emotion although I'd like too.

Just though I'd leave some constructive criticism, please dont take it the wrong way.

I am still interested, If you would like to get this published someday, might i suggest making the chapters a bit more longer. I mean they are good as it is but it seems very brief and doesn't go a whole lot into emotions enough. Being blind is a huge deal, especially if you were able to see before. When I read this story, I don't recieve that sort of emotion although I'd like too.

Just though I'd leave some constructive critism, please dont take it the wrong way.

please update soon!! i really want this story to continue!

I love this! It's probably one of my favorite original stories.

yey you updated
and yey he found out
please update soon!

OoOoOoOo
update :D

I like this. It's so poetic and sad. It's amazing how in each chapter she's really not doing much of anything, it's like the whole story so far is just one filler of a chapter, but yet it's all so entertaining. And, subtly, I suppose, there are events in each chapter that make this story less of just a big filler. :)

I liked it

aww you added Milo in his name(:
Did I have something to do with that?
I love this by the way

update please!

awesome

I liked it

i love this story!
please update

OMG!!! You could even do Emeralda!!!!! I love that name!!!