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  • ProverbofHell

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    Why am I only getting to read this now?
    Damn...I am not usually someone who's into all the emotinal stuff...you know how much I love my drama-filled scream matches...but I cannot deny my love for Baker in this one!
    When did you update it the last time? Is this on hiatus? UPDATE!
    January 4th, 2010 at 01:45pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    I love how them laying in bed in the morning just seems so comfortable and right between them.. like no time has passed. It's quite sweet. :)

    Ohh... I can't even begin to explain how adorable he is for going an washing his mouth out... hahaha. At least he cares and doesn't want to gross her out... though I can't imagine she'd really mind. At least, I know I wouldn't... hahaha.

    I wonder how long it’s going to take him to realize the door wasn’t locked?

    Ahahahah! that's hilarious! Poor Z... if he'd just try the easy way of turning the handle, he would've realised that a lot earlier. hahaha.

    Much praise for the very intense and sexy sex scene! Very nicely done, in my opinion. Not like the typical and standard scene you see most of the time, so yeah, good job!

    Well, that was one hell of an emotional rollercoaster at the end there! To be honest, I was kind of like 'wow, she is kind of crazy and overreacts a lot...' but then when it was revealed the significance of the day and time of their life... it made a lot of sense and I understood her reaction. Poor things... they're both going through a hell of a time... :(

    Though you had me thinking that they would get back together then... bam! Nope, not yet. But that makes sense.. nothing goes that easily. And they broke up for a reason.. so until those issues are resolved and worked through, they're doomed to just re-live it all over again. So good on her for having the strength to be rational and not lose herself in the need and desire for him.

    Still loving and look forward to more :)
    September 10th, 2009 at 05:54pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Yes, I was the one who wanted to break away, to break routine, but I couldn’t live with his denial; the way he just ignored it, like it never happened, like it didn’t even matter. That was when we started going downhill.

    I think I pick up on the secret there... I could be totally wrong... but i'm sensing the loss of something. Again, probably totally wrong... but that's what i'm getting.

    And the explaination of why they'd both moved out of each others houses makes perfect sense. It would feel like that, having to pack up all the stuff that you'd left there.. they basically did live together.. just between the two houses.

    The depression side of things was very sad... which sounds completely dumb, but you know what I mean. You explained what she went through trying to deal with it so beautifully... how hard it was to watch him fall apart and refuse to let her in... I can't even imagine what that would be like to live through. But you gave me an idea of what it is by writing that.. :)

    “Are you doing anything...right now?” he asked. I shook my head. “Lexi? You’re on the phone, don’t nod or shake your head.” I let out a bark of laughter at how well he knew me.

    Hahaha, how often that must occur... it's so hard to forget that the other person can't see you even when it's comfortably conversation... let alone one that has you internally freaking out with a river of mixed emotions running through you.

    “No, we shouldn’t.” I closed my eyes. “But we probably will anyway.”

    Ahahaha. Cocky bugger. Then again, he was right... hahaha.

    Well, that was an unexpected turn. Not just for us, but them too. haha. I hope it doesn't blow up in their face... that would be way too heartbreaking for them :( And me, too.

    Loved it and I look forward to more :)
    August 4th, 2009 at 11:50am
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    Hey! Ok, comment time!*does dance* OK!

    I literally almost cried as she walked on the beach. I seriosuly almost felt her pain, and I dont blame her for being confused. Zack is a confusing guy, a sexy guy but confusing all the same. She seemed to upset...well that was until the last part but lets get to that later!

    “I, uh, I know this is sort of out of the blue,” understatement of the year, “but I...I guess I was just wondering if – maybe – well...”

    Ya think outta the blue Zack?! Uda Uhh OOo...SPIT IT OUT! Does anyone think about what they say before they say it? Write it out! Of course i'm not refering to the story just reality and the stupidity of it all but the way Zack did it was cute and made him seem like how she acted and what she said effected him. At least she still does that too him, hence he still loves her.

    “He’s okay, just being the crazy little fucker that he is,” he shared. I laughed. It felt nice. “He played with Bella earlier; held his own. I’m proud of him.”

    I would need to see that. That cute little black ball of fur...just...awwing would be so cliche but I can't help it. Awww... He's adorable and I love how she casually brings him up. I knew dogs were for something other than being cute and a pain in the ass

    “I swung by his my space page the other day, you know.” Priceless...Sad cuz Icky's my friend on Myspace...thats...really sad. Lol.

    “The little shit has more friends than all of us combined,” You him me and all my friend plus five and the damn dog still has more friends. Loved it and i laughed so hard!

    closed my eyes for a moment, vowing to stop ogling him. It just wasn’t right

    Ogling Zacky should be a law. Thou shall not look at Zackary with out ogling. He's ogliable...thats not a word but oh well. Too cute and adorable.

    then we get to the sex, honestly you put me to shame.*shamed* I loved when he said he loved her....

    which made me think of I Almost Told You That I Loved You- by papa roach. I hope he means it and sticks by her...But then again there would be no story.

    I can't wait for the next chapter! I'll hold you to the end of the month chapter thing!

    :)
    August 4th, 2009 at 08:56am
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    GOOD GOD IN HEAVEN!
    I LOVE IT!
    <333
    August 4th, 2009 at 06:24am
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    Mky. 1. people are idiots for not commenting more on this story. I mean COME ON!

    this story is fantastic~

    2. you wrote beautifully and i'm looking all to forward to the next chapter. I love the lines. Priceless. And i like how you have both their point of view in one chapter. Idk why. I think it gives you more insight on their relationship and the way they talk about each other...love.

    3. Description is wonderful. I like knowing Zacky is in pain so much that drinking isnt even good enough. I like how they both cant sleep in the same bed anymore. Shows connection.

    Basically all around its a great story and i'll be on standby for more.
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:00am
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    You...never cease to amaze me, woman. That chapter was so perfect, on every single level. And it's to realistic, and I honestly felt like I was inside Zacky's head.

    And well...Brian. What else can I say? LOL!!!

    LOVE YOUUUUUUU!
    July 2nd, 2009 at 08:52pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    “You see, there’s this thing called a name. When people call yours, the whole idea is that you answer so they don’t have to go on a fucking Mission Impossible to find you.”

    Matt's lesson for the day! :D

    Matt never taught her to be conscious of her size; hell, just look at him. There was that time when he turned a corner and that kid almost broke a damn bone –

    That made me giggle.. a little dementedly, but that's okay. No one heard me. = p

    Ahaha, I love how even when Matt and Brian are being concerned and worried about Zacky, they still throw around insults... but they're loving insults. haha.

    Okay, I understand that Brian is worried about how Zacky is gonna handle being around Alex with the wedding stuff... but I kind of think it's unfair to yell at Matt like he is. I mean, he can't decide who Jaime picks for her bridal party... and the wedding is about Matt and Jaime... so really, they kind of just have to accept that or bow out... y'know?

    “Zachary James Baker, if you don’t answer me in the next 0.66 seconds, I’m going to punch you in the face while I call 911!”

    Ahahaha! That's one way to get his attention...

    Well... way to leave me on edge, woman! hahaha. I want to know if he called her or another female. haha.

    Btw, go with whatever method of writing suits you best. Personally, I usually start stories off with a bit written, but before I know it I've caught up to myself and I switch to writing as I need to... it really just depends on how it works best for you. I'll wait as long as you need, coz I'm already loving this story enough to be more than paitent for your wonderful updates! :)
    July 2nd, 2009 at 10:08am
  • A7Xmcs

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    You know, what with that whole isolated, being inspired by beauty, one-with-nature stuff everyone's always rambling about. We'll see. lol That's so totally you. I love it. I sit and wonder some times if it really does work, I guess we shall see! Take your time...I know how hectic life can be. Love ya, chick!
    June 27th, 2009 at 10:31pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Aww, don't stress, hun. We understand that your life is a bit hectic now and I'm sure all you readers can be paitent while you try to find some time to write. This story is certainly worth the wait :)

    Hope you have a nice weekend away!! And congrats on graduating!! :)
    June 27th, 2009 at 08:13am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    You blow me away...

    The really amazing and descriptive way you write is so refreshing to come across :) I love how you describe her emotions and her actions so fluidly... it's like I can feel what she's feeling and it's utterly heartbreaking :( Poor dear...

    Not to mention her now being faced with knowing she'll have to see him again soon... when it's clear she's not ready. Far from it, actually.

    I look forward to more of this!! :)
    June 2nd, 2009 at 08:25am
  • A7Xmcs

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    This is awesome. I'm really digging it, woman!!
    June 2nd, 2009 at 02:32am
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!
    SO MUCH!
    and i love you too
    <333
    June 2nd, 2009 at 12:02am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Okay, so I can't believe nobody has commented this yet... I think people are daft if they dont love this!!

    I want more.. please?! I'll love you forever and ever if you continue!

    It's so heartbreaking that they both want the same things, but think they're being selfless by letting the other go... communication, people!!

    Yeah, so more would be awesome :) I'm subscribing... so you kind of don't have a choice = p
    May 29th, 2009 at 07:57am