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  • Music_in_a_jar

    Music_in_a_jar (100)

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    a little on the wierd side...but that's how I like it :D
    August 14th, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • Iris Absurd

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    Funny and slightly creepy. I love it! :D
    July 23rd, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • tiptoes

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    Wow, I loved this. Clap It made me laugh and I just loved it.

    “I swear, if this little girl doesn’t taste good.” He clenched his fists while he, his sire, and sire’s partner skulked up the stairs.
    That was my favorite line, although sulked was spelled wrong, still my favorite.

    I liked how you ended it too, Right then, he sunk his teeth into her neck, and she was never able to trespass in anyone else’s home.

    In Love Sorry, if you didn't need all that information, I just figured I'd share with you why I liked it as much as I did.
    May 13th, 2009 at 10:51pm
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