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  • Kimberlane

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    Part 13

    It's 10.5 pages on word :shock: So I do believe this is the longest chapter I have written to date.
    February 8th, 2007 at 11:09pm
  • antichristofsuburbia

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    I love this. *subscribes*
    It makes my shit seem like crap.

    you have succeeding in deflating my oversized writing ego, well done! :D
    January 7th, 2007 at 09:44pm
  • One Nut Wonder

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    I love the last line. Its funny. I LOVED THE CHAPTER! I can't wait for an update.
    January 6th, 2007 at 08:05am
  • Kimberlane

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    Chapter 12 is up!! :D

    I know its a tad short but hey, I'm doing all I can!
    :lol:

    http://www.mibba.com/stories/read/154/12/
    Thanks for the comments guys, I love you all!
    January 6th, 2007 at 04:46am
  • Missand

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    please message me when the next part is up poor Tre
    January 1st, 2007 at 05:09pm
  • CarolAnn

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    Hey, I think it's great. I've been waiting for the next chapter since GSB haha. keep it up
    December 30th, 2006 at 07:31am
  • One Nut Wonder

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    I remember reading this on GSB. I loved it then and I still love it now. It's really good. My stories suck balls compared to yours.

    I'm subscribing.
    December 29th, 2006 at 06:29am
  • Kimberlane

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    Wow. I was just looking through the forum and was all :shock: when I saw my Story had its own thread.
    Thanks!
    Yeah flow is a problem with me. I'll try and make it better
    December 27th, 2006 at 06:24am
  • Khrist

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    Hey, that was pretty good.

    It didnt really have a smooth rhythm though.
    December 27th, 2006 at 04:30am