May 24th, 2009 at 08:25pm
That's really sad... it kept me thinking.
Your narration was interesting; I could feel myself the annoyance that Andy was going through. Sometimes we don't stop ourselves before we do selfish stuff, and this is a great way to putting in through a story.
I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.
I thought the narration was really interesting and different :cute:
Well done.