Lost Love - Comments

Aww, so sad that it ended.
It would have been cool if you were able to work through the problems for this story and write the ending.
But, I guess them getting together in the end and aging and living together is kinda beautiful.
It's like without knowing it, William was waiting for her. Like she was the person he was supposed to be with all along.

i have to admit, chapter 7 is it in love lost... not your best work,i'm bored of this story isn't much of a story, but hey its yor story, ill read the other now

i am sad to see the end to this story.
*sniff* but i supose i'll just have to live with it.

Sweets, the chapters are not getting suckier. They keep getting better and better. :D
I loved this last one.
It seems fate finally favors poor William...hopefully.

it so good! i love that chapter, it's so romantic! :)
keep it comming!
:crazy:
muchly love

you're getting so many comments now, lol. loved the new chapter, truly inspiring. i hope u continue,eep up thee good work ad end it happily for will, over 100 years with a broke heart i think he deserves it

Soon after she told me of her dreams, she left. She said she was meeting her fiancé for lunch. Now, that was just perfect. I feel as if – not only did my heart get taken away from me; but it was now being stomped on with a little dance to it. Just to squish it a little more.

I loved the way you described that, like adding salt to the wound. Perfect.
I feel bad for William though, it really seems as though he keeps getting...cheated.

He's 181? Jeez, that's a long time to live with a broken heart.
Is Liz his Elizabeth?
And what do her dreams mean exactly?
Going to read chapter 5 now. :D

yey you updated! i love this story!
:):):)
muchly love

this story is awesome.
kinda reminds me of reincarnaio.
and i love beignets!
im obsessed with mardi gras and new orleans
and i had my first beignet in disney world; we stayed in the french quarter.
it truly was a dream come true! haha

oh, it's so beautiful i was at a loss for words. It'samazing, i felt kind of cheated when there where no more chapters, i got so caught up then chapter 4 ended nd i was like... no, keep going. please keep writing it, i want to see how i ends. Please. P.S how weird, her middle name is elizabethand she prefers it, my middle name is elizabeth and i prefer it it danielle. i hate my first name. Anyway, keep up the good work.

i still love your story!!!
i can't wait for more!!!
:):):):)
muchlu love

woooooow
i love this story!!!

I sucked in the tears; they do not fall on my face. Reality is, Elizabeth would never come back, could never come back. I was not dead. The girl in front of me was God’s extra torment for me. An extra lashing of pain for me to carry for eternity, as it seems.

For whatever reason, that paragraph hit me hard. I felt so bad for William there. How long has he been "alive" without her?
And talk about a "dream man."

You'll have to read to find out. =D

This is pretty awesome.
I felt so bad for William losing Elizabeth,
What did she die of?
How is he still alive?