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  • Love.Bite

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    Gemmm
    I love this story.
    I thought I read it before.
    Guess I didn't.
    It's really good.
    August 23rd, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Finished. Awwwwwww, I'm sad, but what a great ending. Loved this story lots and look forward to reading even more of your lovely stories.
    June 3rd, 2009 at 01:14pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Everything up to Chapter 18 has kept me gripped so far! Love chapter 18. Finally Frank knows and I hope he kicks Holly into touch. Love this so so so so so very much.
    June 3rd, 2009 at 01:08pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 13 & 14 - OMG, I hate Holly. How dare she break up the friendship between Rosie and Tilly. Love this story sooooooooooo much, but you already know that right?!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 12:31pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    I have to go now, but seriously, chapter 11 is also bloody wonderful. I love it. That's all I can say.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:56pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Yay yay yay, chapter 9 is so damn fine! Amazing.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:45pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 7 & 8 - I'm probably irritating the life out of you know, but I just love the story, so I will keep commenting until I feel it's getting shite, which is never going to happen! Holly needs a bloody good slap; the bitch.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:41pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 5 & ESPECIALLY 6: This is just getting better and better. I love Tilly & Rosie. I know that to have a friend like that means the world. You write the friendship between them so well and I love the relationship between Frank & Tilly; it's total unrequited love!
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:34pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Woooohooooooooooooo - frikkin' well love chapter 4! Holly is a bitch and let me guess who the band might be? Ha ha ha ha. Really loving this story so much. Very well written indeed. The only thing I would criticise is the size of the font; my eyesight has never been great, but it's gettin worse as I get older.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:23pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Seriously, I'm officially now addicted to this story! Chapter 3 is excellent. Poor Tilly. I know the chapters are short, but it makes for quicker reading and you're not boring the reader with unnecessary gunk. Well done.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE the second chapter. This is what I'm like with my BFFF; lost without her. So yeah, I can relate to this as well. I love you're style of writing as it's very much like mine. You convey conversations between the characters well. You really get a feel for individual personalities. Love it, love it.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 04:47pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    I know this story is finished and I may a bit late on the uptake, but this is an excellent first chapter. It's so heartfelt and I can relate to Tilly and Frank as I had much the same situation when I was at school (I'm coming up to 30 now and remember it like it was yesterday). I'm sooooooooooooooo going to read the rest now and if it's as good as the first chapter, then you've nailed it hun.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 04:37pm
  • S9B3

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    Farewell story -sniffle-
    Well done xD
    xox
    June 1st, 2009 at 05:34am
  • Post-It

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    That was such a perfect ending!
    I loved this story.
    Definitely one of my favourites.
    :D
    June 1st, 2009 at 12:03am
  • skeletal.

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    Today! Today!
    May 31st, 2009 at 06:02pm
  • Christ!

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    TODAY! :cute: :D
    May 31st, 2009 at 02:52pm
  • Post-It

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    Naaaw!
    Everything is how it should be now. :D
    That was awesome!

    I think you should update today today today.
    If you want to that is?
    May 31st, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • Post-It

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    Ahhhh! :D
    That was brilliant.
    *dances*
    He kissed her!
    Perfect!
    I'll be sad when this ends I love it so much.
    May 29th, 2009 at 09:38pm
  • Post-It

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    Propose?
    As in....
    Whoa!
    How could you leave it like that?
    More soon please?
    :tehe:
    Go Tilly for kicking Holly's ass!
    May 29th, 2009 at 08:01pm
  • skeletal.

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    I love this, Tilly should beat Holly up more. Its epic.
    May 29th, 2009 at 05:54pm