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  • Mr. Darcy

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    An update?!
    At first, I didn't have a clue about what this story was, the title I hadn't seen for yonks...but then I did!!
    I am soo glad that you updated!!!
    Because it was just as good as it was last time, amazing!!
    Seriously...asides the loong gap!! D:
    September 3rd, 2010 at 09:54pm
  • Broken Soul

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    HOLY SHIT!
    This is seriously my favorite story of yours. It's so different, but it totally fits your writing style, you know? I'm so into it - I swear I just spent an hour reading it all.
    It's fabulous - regardless of the few typos, but I know how it is! I think this is some of your best work to date.
    Keep up the good work.
    Great updates.... Love it! Totally love it!
    It's sooo good.

    xoxo - Kat
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    October 25th, 2009 at 08:16pm
  • XFallenAngelX0

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    Nice update! These guys are going to break up soon, I know... XD I'm so clueless 'bout will happen next..
    Hahaha, update sooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnn!
    October 14th, 2009 at 01:45am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Woa, update lovved once again. Shanes POV!! Woah. She can't have kids!! That sucks! lol. I'm finding this really funni and loving it. Keep up the updates please!! XLD
    September 28th, 2009 at 09:06pm
  • XFallenAngelX0

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    Rain and Shane? X.X... How old is he?... I like how the story is turning! Every chapter is coming better and better. Update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 28th, 2009 at 05:55am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    woohhh, she's changing!! She's going soft!! Lol. It's good and I am loving it!! Continuing will do good!! XLD
    September 7th, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • XFallenAngelX0

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    Loved this last 3 chapters. Rain is changing... in some way... I think XD. Continue it!!!!!
    September 4th, 2009 at 02:01am
  • OutOfStyle

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    hmm.. i kinda don't like holden for some reason... I hope she ends up with someone else in the end!!
    August 31st, 2009 at 01:52am
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    hmm.. i kinda don't like holden for some reason... I hope she ends up with someone else in the end!!
    August 31st, 2009 at 01:52am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    woohhh, luv the update!!
    August 30th, 2009 at 11:26pm
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    LMAO funny
    August 24th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    I burst out laughing in the last chapter. Soo funny.

    This is like the best non-fanfiction story I have read on here.
    August 22nd, 2009 at 09:50pm
  • OutOfStyle

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    Love it!!! One of the best stories i've subscribed to!
    August 19th, 2009 at 05:34am
  • XFallenAngelX0

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    Wow, I must be sincere, I didn't expected to be so great. Very original story n' love your writing. I will follow the story 'till the end!!!! Hahaha...

    P.S.: CONTINUE IT!!!!!! Is awesome!
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • digz7

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    its a very interesting turn...
    will be interesting to see where it goes
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • digz7

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    awesome you should def add more i love how it started and where it can go
    August 5th, 2009 at 06:19pm
  • Broken Soul

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    Well, it is a lot different than your other stories. It's not something I would actually read - but I will anyway, since you're the author! ; ) - but you made me want to read more, even when, in normal books, I would put it down. You have very captivating writing skills, no matter what you're writing, I find.
    One thing - Wow. You make really good bad as**s! Jeez, I normally haven't read anything that graphic before :P.
    Don't get me wrong, it was good! Keep it up, and I'll keep reading it! ; )
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    xoxoxx --Bells

    ps - there are some typos, just to let you know. *winky face*
    May 26th, 2009 at 04:08am