Heyyy. You asked me to read this story, and I did. But, it's not grabbing my attention. It's just not for me, really. I think it's a cool idea, and I've never read a story where the protagonist is blind, but it's just not grabbing my attention.
Very nice idea for a story :) I already love it, thanks for telling me about it. Chapter 4 though, Brian was an ass... Than again, a break up is really fucked up, but snapping at just anyone. If I was Jamie I'd try to find his face and slap him :D but that's just me
but like lol. one thing that bugged me is that i'm guessing jamie's around 14 or so, and the rev is like.. 28. so does that mean he had her when he was 14? lol idk. maybe this is the future.