We Were Both Young When I First Saw You - Comments

This was really cute I liked it a lot the only thing was that her dad came off as very controlling - "if dad lets me go to the studio" But I loved it and the wedding was so sweet! xoxo

Chapter 6 LMFAO!!!!!!! Those rules are something my dad tried and failed when my mum told him to shut up and behave lol. I'm snowed in 2day so I can read this whole story YAY!!!!! xoxo

Just read the first chapter and I really liked it....it made me laugh how she always refers to them as "something sevenfold" I hope she continues to address them like that because well its just fun lol xoxo

hey love the stories. Keep it up. Hehe, my name is Ashlyn xD

Recognize me? (;

I know people here have commented that your is amazing - it is amazing, but I have something I wanted to add for myself.

You write fantastically, you describe to the best of your ability --- but, you lack the full potential to describe the emotions. You write your emotions, you don't feel them. I think if people could feel the emotions from the story it would work a lot better.

Here's a comment you will recognize. I wanted you to write your thoughts as part of your sentence not as something that's like "Hey, wow, did you see that? That was totally out of the ordinary!" That's not the best example but when your thoughts are in italic and don't say something like
"I was thinking about how Matt looked awesome today and.." or
"I wish Matt would notice me more." (I am aware they are not from the story)
I think if you controlled the way your characters thought better it would be even more awesome.

I wanted to comment about capitalizing but you already told me about that. ):

Good job - and keep up the work! (:

OMG, so cute! That was absolutely amazing. Stunning. Breathtaking. I'm sorry that better words have failed me. That was AWESOME!

A7XLover:

omg omg omg!!!!

its over :(

but this was amazingggggg!!!!!

and the playlist was fun!! i loved the last chapter!! it had to be my favorite!!! ♥

That. weirdly was exactly what I wanted to say O.o

omg omg omg!!!!

its over :(

but this was amazingggggg!!!!!

and the playlist was fun!! i loved the last chapter!! it had to be my favorite!!! ♥

It's over?!
It was a brilliant story and I loved it!
Great song choice btw.

I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!! :( but oh what a beautiful ride! Congrats on a completely lovely story!

Oh and the "soundtrack" at the end was just awesome.

That was just amazing!!!! You thought of everything with the wedding. I absolutely loved the playlist too!

Wonderful story!!

The final chapter was just soooooooooooooo cute! I loved the whole wedding details, and everything! It was so adorableeeeeeeeee :D!!!

I absoutley love this story, and I can't wait to read teh sequels :D!
xoxo

I loved it....
cant wait for the sequel

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
I loved it! Everything looked gorgeous!!!!
Love the story, great ending :D

aw that was such a cute ending...loved the wedding and reception
cant wait for the sequel!

cute :) i like the wedding dress you picked (: more soon please! i cannot wait to see how the wedding goes :)

the "The Love Pinch" Bridal Couple Figurine
The dolls made me laugh :D
I loved the chapter.

Awww! How cute!
I loved the update babe. Very adorbale!
I can't wait for the next update honey!

Awesome cake and dress! It's so pretty!

Can't wait for the wedding!

Too Cute!
Her dress is purdey. :)