Moonflowers - Comments

omg don't give up on this and keep it going!
I lovereading it its very entertaining...
:)

Oohhh, Prince Brendon Urie. Nice! Okay then so, now that I'm done, I can say...Update soon! Yeah! I am subscribed, by the way.

Well, I would've expected Bren to be a vampire. But I guess Ryan is? I don't know. Chapter three..here I come.

Okay, so I like this. It's hard to find a well written vampire story these days. Plus it's involving lovely mr. Ross, (Cough, my husband, Cough) so it has to be good right? Spencer the manservant is pretty awesome, I must admit. Now I'm off to read chapter two.

It was really good, I can't wait to read more ^^

Sorry for your confusion!
The meals were brought to her in secret, meaning her parents wouldn't know that she was eating, therefore, the assumption from her parents would be that she was starving herself. Sorry if I didn't make that clear! But I changed it so it should make more sense now. ^^

"I even had meals brought to me in secret, obviously a rebellion is more effective if it looks like not only am I upset, I’m starving myself as well. I had probably been laying there for hours, or maybe minutes, I couldn’t tell."

It said she had meals brought to here in secret, but then you wrote that she was starving herself? I'm just wondering, because it really confused me.

Anyways, I really liked it. Please update.