Violet Hill - Comments

oh man let me just say that your writing was always good, but my oh my have you improved! The mannurisms that you describe Peter and Evelyn- all of them going through truly lets the reader invision it with detail, not just passing over the words carelessly. You make every word tie together perfectly and nothing that is said in the chapter is extra, it all needs to be in there - and you capture each scene perfectly.
Definitely in awe of this!

I'm so glad you updated, and thanks for dedicating it to me, I'm honored!

I really like Evelyn, she can stand her own ground. But at the same time she's not some like undefeatable character you know? Also the fact that she doesn't trust just anyone is a plus.

I think I'd be very scared of Caspian, as well.

Oh, and I think it's good that you explained why Caspian was seeing her as an enemy or a spy or something at first It helped make sure he wasn't being a jerk for no reason lol.

:) great update, can't wait for the next one.

A dedication? To me? -is honored- Ahaha.
So I have to admit that I'm wicked happy you've updated this story. An angry Caspian sounds pretty intimidating, not gonna lie.
& that's cute how Peter is so protective of her. Awwh. I love everyone/everything about this story.

Fo' rizzle. Keep it up! I can't wait until the next one.

It's amazing so far!
I love Evelyn's fiesty attitude : D
I can't wait for the next update!

Heh, I only got to checking this out now. :XD Sorry.

But I really liked it! It's intriguing... :cute: I can't wait to see what happens next!

I swear I left a comment...
Maybe it didn't submit?
hmm
well anyways..
this was wonderful :)
And thank you so much for not making her win in the sword fight against Peter.
I hate when peoples ocs are better than everyone.
So thank you, thank you, thank you~

:D

What is this nonsense? Only one comment? Pssht. For shame, Mibbians. This story rocks my neon orange socks.

No but seriously. I love it, lol. Especially Evelyn's in-your-face attitude. Can't wait for more! :arms: