Methinks Josey was dreaming of Alex. Mhmm, I haven't heard Aiden's music before... I'll be sure to check them out. The flashback sequence was really well-written by the way, probably one of the best parts of the chapter. More soon, I hope?
AAAAAMAZING. I'm guessing it's her that he likes, right? Because you know.. I'm so smart. |: This was just as good as any other and I'm anxious, really really anxious, for you to post some more!
I really, really LOVE Alex. xD He's so sweet and caring in this story. where usually he comes off as an asshole. its diffrent. and thats why i love it so much. :]
Jack really should have just apologized to her face, that was such a copout. I agree with the comment above, this could be a love triangle. Poor Alex, I know what he means when he described his feelings for 'that girl' but to be cheated on... definitely not cool.
HOLY CROW! I was right, I'm never right. I scrolled down a lot to get to the bottom. I agree with the comment above, poor Alex. I'd hate to be cheated on, especially finding out that way. Such a horrible thing. But I love this story still, it's getting better and better with each update.
Poor Alex. I definitely think him and Lisa are absolutely adorable together, though. Also, this story is making me more excited to be seeing Hey Monday, on Saturday. I love this. I can't wait to see what happens, now.
One of the first stories I've seen where Jack isn't being the lovely goof that he is. I like it. I love adorable, sweetheart Alex. Makes me smile. This story's amazing, already. ~subscribing!
now you have 23 subscribers and 8 comments, but by the time you read this it might change to something even greater. (: YAY. this story deserves the feedback it's getting. I think people can give you more!