I absolutely ADORE!!!!!!!!! this story! you gotta keep writing!!!!!!!!!! I may even write my own! P.S: your story is the first one I've subscribed to on mibba! I wouldn't have done that if it wasn't so cool!
I just discovered your story and fell in love with it. Its so amazing. What a great ending. So glad I found it. Its hard to find worthwhile stories and yours definitely is.
Oh...kay? That was... gory. But amazing :) I sense two men from Happy Town coming for Richard with a love blanket and bouncy room at some point in the future. LOL vague words for psych wards. Gotta love 'em!
I wait in anxious anticipation for the final chapter(s)!
OMG RICHARD THAT SICK PSYCHO!!!! Well at least now Michael and Dani be together. So i am happy sort of ish. Lots of blood and gore heheheh yeah it was quiet the emotional chapter. Thank you for talking me on that journey though it was very interesting. I loved it because I could believe every word. Long story short, YOU ARE AWESOME!!! THE STORY IS AWESOME!!! AND YOUR WRITING SKILLS ARE EVEN MORE SO!!!!
So, far, I've already read chapter one and I must say, I really like the girl protagonist. You are one of the better writers on this site, defiantly. ^^