*claps manically* Yay update!*slows the clapping as she reads the new chapter, eventually stops clapping* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Michael Come back!!! *cries* Creepy ex-girlfriend! And Hey uber creepy Richard! And Kevin oh don't get me started...
omg! i love ur story! i couldn't put it down. it's like 4:30 in da morning where i am. :P it's so cute! i rarely like reading, but i thought this story looked interesting and i ended up loving it!! i never thought i could love a story so much. :) please update as soon as u can! can't wait for da 24th chapter. :P
Okay, one slightly bitchy point: I have actually almost suffocated before (not intentionally, though. I was like nine. long story short, the Heimlich is not fun when on the receiving end) and it takes a lot longer than that to suffocate. (Four minutes till dead, I think one and a half until blackout) and she would have had time to get water and swallow them. That's the only thing, though!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! Especially the emotional parts :) When Dani first started swallowing the pills, I was like, 'hey, this looks like something I wrote but have yet to post' but then the whole choking thing... so yeah.
spectacular story! i'm really loving it! just found it yesterday and been reading ever since then. (except for a few hours of sleep) hope you update soon! you've really got a talent for writing. ^_^