I really enjoyed the second chapter. It's very original and well written. Your descriptions are great.
December 6th, 2009 at 02:31am
Free Fall - Comments
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It would be really nice to know if you're ever planning on continuing. This is unlike anything I've ever read, and I really enjoyed it.August 21st, 2009 at 08:41am
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Okay, so...just keep in mind that this comment is going to suck. :XD
But, here goes.
So I've barely ever read anything with a Gerard/Jepha pairing, except for Crazy by you which was awesome by the way, but 'cause it's you I decided to check this out. I like your style, and the descriptions are very interesting and dark and vivid. I like that you don't spell everything out and I'm left wondering (what they were climbing for one thing) and it's just...nice to read. Not the actual content, but the style is something that makes me compelled to read on.
I'm also interested in where the story will go from here...flashbacks perhaps?
But yeah, main point being that you definitely should be proud and that I really think you've grown as a writer from the earlier work I've read of yours...not that your earlier work sucked (it didn't - I'm waiting on an update for Gerard's Little (Big) Secret fo sho :tehe:), but you seem to have found a certain tone/style here.May 22nd, 2009 at 06:42am
