YOU UPDATED AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY LIFE HAS MEANING AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDD I so can't wait for the next update. I thought honestly that you wouldn't update again and you just gave up for some stupid reason like not enough comments. I would have been so heart broken if that was true cause I love it all too much!! <3
Don't you dare stop updating!!!! I will be forever scared if I don't know the ending of this story. Seriously, with a few grammar corrections, it's good enough to become a short novel. And I mean published in stores and sold throughout the country! UPDATE!!!!!!!!
Wow! just wow! this chapter was amazing! First of all I was totally stuck in suspense for almost the whole chapter! I couldn't imagine how Jack and his crew... or even jack would be able to escape suck an intense battle. For a minute I thought they would all just die! And what Kate did was sooo sweet.... If im guessing write (not really guessing but.... reading between the lines) Kate just sacrificed herself for Jack. Awwwwww. that's sooooo sweet and I totally didn't see it coming! And the last thing she said (i don't think i can remember it enough to quote it.) was really sad and kinda beautiful at the same time. I'm really glad that Jack forgave her. I just hope that IF Kate dies Jack has the chance to tell her that he forgave her : ) anyways that was a lot of action and drama! Im sad cause I'm travaling to the middle of no where so I wont be able to read in a while. But im still excited for the next update! thanks!
Omg! This is such an amazing story. I absolutely love your portrayal of captain Jack! A year ago I looked for hours for a decent pirate story, in all of the stories jack's personality sucked. No body could capture him. But you did and it's amazing! Reading your story is like watching the movie it's self. And their relationship is soo sweet. Jack is so in love he would do anything for her. But in this last chapter it seems like he doesn't love her anymore! But she was just doing what she thought was best! Awe I don't know how you will make this story end happily but I have faith in you. I can't wait till the next update I'll check everyday if I have to. Please make it soon!