Aww! They are so cute. I think bella is going to be bitchy about the whole situation and tell the voultori everything.. Or almost everything, just to get rid of her for unknown reasons.. Well half unknown reasons. Hmm.. Sucks about the internet thing. Good luck with that ;) good chapter. :3
I loved how you used lines from Alice and Jasper or ar least inspired by them, as an end for this chapter. It simply fit perfectly. And I simply awed my way through this chapter. Can't wait to see what will happen next and what you'll pull from up your sleeve of tricks. Good chapter.
I had completely forgotten about this. But it's as good as the last time I've read it. I like the new characters and editing to others. I like the interaction between the characters. I like the writing style of this and how there is a certain feeling in it. A feeling I as a reader enjoy, because it helps when I'm getting sucked into the story. Hmm... I wonder what Jasper will say to her after that or simply his reaction. Hmmmm... I think that was it. Good chapter and good story so far and I'm looking forward to even more.
Thank you for subscribing (: first off haha. I love any sort of comments, constructive criticism is also welcome, just comment whatever you're feeling about the story (:
I just found your story and so far I really like it =D It's different in a good way and I have decided that I can't pass it up. So I'm subscribing in a second.
I have a question for you though. Do you want comments or not? and if yes, than do I have to rate them or cut out any bad or negative thing (if that is the case) out of them?? Just curious..
Liking your story so far and I hope for more soon =)