I Will Protect You - Comments

  • Teen Distortion.

    Teen Distortion. (100)

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    YOU READ THIS TO ME LAST NIGHT <3

    But yes, you really did.
    And this is really, very interesting.

    It just reminds me of a dream or something deja vu. Almost like I'm peering into someone's thoughts or maybe something I've dreamed about before. I can't like explain it. It seems real, and scary almost. Like scary to some people, but it doesn't scare me. I really like it and I can't get this image out of my mind. I was thinking about it when I went to sleep last night, and I keep thinking of a forest.
    And a moon.

    I love it, it's different, but a good different.

    I think this little bit is outstanding and it's the words that keep sticking in my head.
    You are the sunlight and the stars

    And this part too,
    It might be hard at first, not to laugh when they come after us in their blinding white and metal instruments, stony expressions and bad intentions

    Annnnnd this one, because I have the magic, and you are the spell.

    Beautifully done, my dear.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 12:09am