A Midsummer's Night Dream - Comments

This story is seriously like amazing.
I noticed that you haven't updated in a long while.
Please update?
I really want to read it!
It's definitely an amazing story so far :D

P.S I also agree with what looks like rain had said. Be sure to keep a note of that. (:

YAY! Any story with Rupert in it is a fave :]]]] suby!

WHOO!
I loved it.
Like, seriously.
Even though Daniel Radcliffe reminds me of a penguin at certain times ....
But, you know, it's all good.

The only critique I can give you is that whenever you're writing out a story that [I assume] you're taking seriously, remember the basics of writing. You two are really good authors, but the one thing I noticed was that you used '2' or '3' instead of writing out 'two' or 'three.
Many scholars andteachers remind their students that unless it's over twenty, write out the numbers. It's a little weird seeing '3' when in dialogue, you know?

Like in this sentence:
[...] My 2 sisters, 3 brothers and I all grew up there.

It's just awkward to have numbers there. It really ... I don't know ... makes it a bit of a mediocre sentence, you know? Just try to keep that in mind, but everything else was great.
Seriously.
You two will be amazing!
:D

iiiiiiiiiii absolutely love it!
you girls will do wonderfully with this one. :D