It's Not a Mistake If You Always Repeat It - Comments

I'm so excited! Can't wait to find out what happens next.

*feels heart shatter*
Gah that was so emotional!
I knew it was going to come eventually but it still made me cry :(

The chapter was perfectly written and I feel as if we've seen Gee and Frankie's relationship through thick and thin and I think that makes it even harder for the reader to bare the emotional distance between the two ='(

I seriously feel guilty for doubting... but I just can't think how they're gunna fix their relationship v_v Or will they even try? Gahhh suspense

This was one of the first stories I began reading on here and I've adored it from the beginning. It truly is amazing.

Please don't leave us hanging ^_^ Write more as soon as you can?

im going to cry.
this is so inevitable, i mean you KNEW it was gonna happen.
but it still sucks so badly.
im really sad.
god, for some reason i was suddenly really paranoid you were going to end the story right threre.
and that really almost made me cry hahah
um.
please tell me you arent ending the story soon.
PLEASE

Oh.
So, no one died, but their hearts did.
I'm still sad, Sara-ness. I will cyber-beg if I have to; maybe a bit more happiness? It's just so tragic that they can never stay that way for long. Cruel, cruel. Frankie, Gee... is it over? It had been so beautiful, so pure, so perfect-- will it be ruined forever now? I panicked when the I saw the chapter title. I thought it was done. I think it almost is, and I'm getting nostalgic. This was the first story I've read on here, you know, and I've been following it since.
-breathes- I think I'll have a good cry in the corner now.

poor frankie, o my god that was freaking amazing. there's absolutly nothing for me to critique. it was all....perfect! please update more when you can

Omg, seriously. Oh god! Im crying and I rarely cry from a book or a movie but fuck. Fix it, Oh god please fix it. Make Gee better and make Frankie let Quinn down easy and make it all better and and man I dont give a fuck about Bert.

Wow your writings amazing! It's just...wow

Im in tears....Oh god Im going to go read the next chapter. ( i just read the second last.)

omg! the suspense is killing me. This is so emotional and sad. You are such an amazing storyteller i can FEEL their hearts breaking....

It's over for them. That just breaks my heart :(

Gerards' POV, that was wonderful. It was nice seeing what he thought about everything, knowing for sure that he is really seeing Bert.

How on earth are you going to fix this?
Or are you? :(

"I missed those times when I was convinced we could beat every John in the fucking world. But, how many Berts would have to happen for me to finally open my eyes? There would always be something,"

That sounds so...final? So resigned to their fate, part of me also misses the hope that he once shared but then again the emotions you're describing and the reactions are just so realistic, which is one of the numerous reasons i love this story, because i know your characters are based on actual human beings who cry when they're hurt and burn their heart away by watching the person they love disappear.

"I loved him, God knew I did, but that had suddenly stopped being enough. I loved the man he used to be, not the weary shadow before me. Not this, not Gerard. I loved Gee. And with him gone, a part of me died away."

That paragraph seemed to sum it all up for me, frank's feelings on everything, something to engrave on the tombstone of their relationship.

With that chapter it spelled the end more clearly then i've ever been able to see it, you made me feel that they just can't try anymore, when i didn't even feel like that when John was on the scene.
And including Gerard's point of view was a pleasant surprise and gave me an insight into how he was feeling aswell, it didn't do much to revive my sense of hope either though.

"He stopped believing in us. And our truth was… just gone, there were no other words to describe this new kind of void I felt growing within me. Gone, and the last traces of perfection would soon completely disappear"
This wasn't that constructive i'm afraid but i'm so glad that this isn't the end and desperate to see what happens next, once again you have me completely stumped and racking my brains.

that was an amazing update, im dying for more!!

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You’ll Be the One Standing Behind the Loaded Gun

Collision Kiss.:

And it's really bad I want Frank to have an affair with Quinn, right? Yeah, right. Bad thoughts, bad thoughts...

See! See! Ha!
I'm smart! =].
Someone tell me I'm smart?!

*ahem*

Anyway...

Dearest, I loved this chapter.
BUT ILY MORE.
You're quite an incredible writer.

I love how Frank just crashes into Quinn, especially since he was worried about Quinn crashing, whilst thinking he had just become numb to the pain. Which he blatantly hadn't. He thought he was just going to die quietly on the inside, whilst Quinn would go down in blaze of love-soaked bullets. As if. He's completely got it the wrong way round. :roll:

"I was slowly caving in, Quinn was just going to crash."

I love how for so long it's been Gerard holding up Frank, then Frank holding up Gerard, going on and on - until it's just too much... and then there's Quinn. Like it was meant to happen.

"...a part of me craved him, craved that disturbing serenity he’d always emit."

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"“Frank?”

I loved how he never called me Frankie."

I like Quinn.
Did I mention that?
Just like I liked Riley when no one liked Riley. I still like Riley, actually =].
I must have this thing for universally-hated secondary characters... or just under-dogs. Even though Quinn isn't really that secondary, especially now x].

I did love Gerard's reaction at the end though. Even though I couldn't help thinking 'Ha! Taste of your own medicine now Gerard?'. And Gerard calls him Frankie. Which is what Quinn doesn't. The end just emphasises the differences between the two of them. Even when Quinn was angry at him, or at least accusing, it was just the tone of his voice that had an effect on Frank... whereas Gerard throws phones and he just answers like a teenager who stayed out past curfew.

Can you tell this chapter is driving me crazy? I. Love. It.
And I'm getting all excited x].
You're quite an incredible writer. I could never say that enough.

That was unbelievably sad but don't be sorry]- that just means you achieved your job, just shows how completely immersed i am with this story and those characters you've made me crave.

Fuck that description was brilliant, especially the part apart Gerard on stage "those double-edged touchs, lopsided, crooked grins, seductive smirks..." (yes sorry my copy button isn't working so i can't quote properly) but it was just the essence of gerard, it was a 100% perfect description and could get people(foolish) who haven't ever seen him paint this perfect image.

Quinn and Frankie, see i thought that was going to happen before and then i let down my guard and bam, there it is. I'm a sucker for frerards but frank deserves somebody to love him and be there for him- but can quinn do that?
argh you make my brain frazzle in confusion of over-thinking.

I love that gee was jealous, it gives me hope.
bravo sara, i can't say much more but that was once again faultless

omg i thought frankie was gonna sleep with quinn... omg are frank and gee ever gonna be alright again.....awsum update!

I'm......god this is amazing.
on one hand, it tears me apart that this is happening,
on the other
its so triumphant, frank finally fighting back.

you really are amazing, you know that right?

fab update... Frankie playing Gerard at his own game....mmmm
this is all going to end in tears.
Amazing stuff

Wonderful update as usual ^_^
I adore the plot, with all it's twists and turns :D
Cannot wait to see what's going to happen next!

Totally fab! Can't wait for more.

i dont no who i wanna b togeva quinn or gerard and frank!!!
im so confused =S

Ahh damn...
it's still heartbreakingly beautiful.