Paper Cranes - Comments

I read this story a long, long time ago, but it's one of the best stories I've read. I love how it's not like a lot of other stories. I loved reading this, I wanted you to know.

just read this. i love it. its one of the best pieces of writing ive ever seen

I love this story. I've been sitting up for like two hours reading this! I just want to let you know that this is ONE OF THE BEST Brendon Urie story's I have ever read! :-) It made me cry! Good job!! :-)

Well...I love this story. Love it to death. I never read a Mibba story yet, that made me cry. Thank you so much for writing it.

By far one of the best stories I've read on Mibba

I know I'm late on commenting, but I loved this story!! It was just sooooo good :] Keep up the amazing work! :]]

this was so good! awazing!! :)

Great story. Really, it is. Even if Elizabeth died. It was very touching. Congrats with finishing your amazing story. =D

I just found this story and read it all the way through at once. It is breathtaking.
You are an insanely talented writer <3

that was an amazing ending, so beautiful :D loved it soooooooooooooooooooooo much :D

Beautifully ended.
I can't think of any other way that the ending could have been done.
<333

omg!
-wipes tears-
that was beautiful....
:(
sad but elegant, i think.
you wrote this perfectly.

-kayt

Awwwwwww I cried <3

...

-is speechless from the amazingness and events-

I had to read the chapter twice to get the full impact. At first I was like... what just happened? And by the second time I was tearing. It was sad. Great chapter. It doesn't matter if it takes a while to get a chapter out cuz it always comes ot awesome.

curses, I KNEW IT!!

its' so SADDDDDD *snifffff*

.....sad. needs another ending. mmph

she's...dead?
but...aw what a sad ending.
i hope she's not really dead...
epilogue soon please?
<3 :]

She's dead?
She can't be dead. Wasn't there supposed to be something magical that happens? She miraculously gets better? -sob-
Hhmph. What's going to happen to Brendon. Is he going to kill himself
-SSSOBBB-
I want the epilogue.
Love,
Lillie.

noooooooooooooo she died? nooooo
she didnt deserve it
that was an amazing chapter though :D very well written :D

This chapter wasn't crappy is was sweet and depressing all at once (in a good way) :)
Is the epilogue going to be a sequel or just another chapter?