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  • ARGHHHHH!

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    Gasp! Continue please!
    August 2nd, 2009 at 09:48pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    I loved it...
    now i'm thinking maybe he should've just told her from the beginning
    but again, i understand why he didn't
    it's all so very empathetic for me right now
    keep it up, dahl.

    -Kayt
    July 27th, 2009 at 06:42pm
  • makenice77

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    This is so great. I love this story!
    Keep up the great work.
    July 26th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • account is inactive

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    I want to know what he got her! And she's being a little harsh. At least that's what I think.
    Update soon!
    July 26th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • See.

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    Oh, no.
    I hope she'll forgive him. (:
    More soon?
    July 25th, 2009 at 09:15pm
  • See.

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    OOOH.
    She's mad.
    You're in for it now, Brendon. >.<
    Can't wait for more!!
    July 18th, 2009 at 06:30pm
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I believe I haven't commented on this story yet. <.< But I love it. =] It's more original than other PATD stories I have read. It kind of reminds me of the Japanese drama 1 Litre of Tears though...
    July 18th, 2009 at 06:31am
  • riddlemeadream

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    totally busted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    more soon, i hope???
    July 17th, 2009 at 08:41pm
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    I absolutely loved both of the updates. I hope Brendon can explain before she flips....
    July 17th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • Desolate Earth

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    ooh i hope she doesnt get too mad!
    July 17th, 2009 at 07:57pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Damn, now she knows and I don't want her to know althought eariler I couldn't wait for her to know.
    Shit... i'm confused.
    Loverlie, as my aunt would say.

    -Kayt
    July 17th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • See.

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    Brilliant chapter!! I loved it. <3
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:28pm
  • paperheartsstop

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    ryan and jon are leaving the band
    July 7th, 2009 at 09:39am
  • niall horan;

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    THIS IS AMAZING!
    why only 20 chapters? this story amazes me. SO MUCH.
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more. I stayed up till 3am reading this. :)
    July 7th, 2009 at 08:08am
  • See.

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    I'm really excited to find out what 'Bryan' will say to her... xD
    Update soon!
    July 5th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Poor Ryan... he's in love with Brendon and Brendon loves Elizabeth....
    Poor thing....
    I loved it, btw.

    -Kayt
    July 2nd, 2009 at 11:27pm
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    Did I ever tell you how much I love that picture you have on the layout of brendon? It's gorgeous.
    July 2nd, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • See.

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    The whole way through, I was just like; "Turn it back to MTV, turn it back!".
    But, maybe it'd be better for her to find out from him. xD
    Heh, you're welcome! It's actually been there for quite a while now, heh. (:
    Ooh, Ryan's secret. Poor thing.
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:36pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Frigging awesome, dearie.
    I love it...
    And I can just feel that Elizabeth's gonna find out about Brendon and PATD...
    i want to know how she'll react...

    -Kayt
    June 30th, 2009 at 07:01pm
  • erin.whatserface.

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    ...I don't understand why Ryan hates Elizabeth.
    Am I slow, or was that intentional?
    Because his 'It' was telling him he was a coward, so he didn't give his real reason for not liking her... right?

    Bah! I am CONFUSED!

    Congratulations.
    You now have me hanging on the edge of my seat for the next update.
    June 30th, 2009 at 01:38am
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