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  • Confide.

    Confide. (100)

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    that was pretty amazing.

    <3
    August 23rd, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • Beating.Heart.Baby.

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    Very nice. It was sweet. But, I honestly think that the story's theme would be better or a full story than it would be or a one shot. Some themes are better for stories and some are better or one shots.

    Maybe you could have explained how Craig has this power in the first place.

    The part about the zebras was funny. :)

    Very good. Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
    August 10th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    If you leave me a comment, please give me some honest feedback. I want to know what you do or do not like about my story.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 07:14pm
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