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  • Brian Haner Jr

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    My. Ovaries. Are. No. More.
    *is ded*

    That is all.
    :D
    September 21st, 2011 at 09:55am
  • itbemet

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    I'd been so pissed if you hadn't killed Michelle! Poor Brian though. Least he got fucked for he died!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 07:38am
  • JorelDecker

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    I wasn't expecting you to kill Brian, but hey ho, at least you killed Michelle to make up for it.xD
    August 2nd, 2010 at 09:56pm
  • Odd!Aud!

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    At first, I did think that she wouldn't go through with the kill...
    but then she did and I was strangely...happy that you'd gone that route.
    It was extremely unpredictable.
    And then saying that Michelle ordered the hit and then got killed too!
    Icing on the cake, dearie.
    I was sad that Brian died, too, but that one shot was BRILLIANT!
    July 27th, 2009 at 08:55pm
  • Jinxxx

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    u killed bri bri :'( but did kill michelle(i dont like her)so all good loved the storie=D
    July 21st, 2009 at 11:05pm
  • Gryffindor_GreenDay2

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    Why kill Brian??? *crycry*
    I loves Brian very much.
    Can you just kill Michelle.
    I met her once...
    Didn't like her one bit.
    Anyhow, it was amazing.
    Very descriptive!

    <3
    ~*+Steph+*~
    July 10th, 2009 at 02:58pm
  • Of Course Not

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    RavynBlu:
    That was way cool. I wasn't expecting that. Ending it with her killing the person who placed the hit was a perfect idea. It summed it up nicely!

    And yes I know who Michelle is, I just wanted to refer to it as a story, not Brian and Michelle. Cause its a great story idea. Original.
    I agree with this. It was very nicely written and original. :mrgreen:
    June 16th, 2009 at 08:18pm
  • cruciatus.

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    Killing Michelle so made up for that. :) Great one-shot!:)
    May 30th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • RavynBlu

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    That was way cool. I wasn't expecting that. Ending it with her killing the person who placed the hit was a perfect idea. It summed it up nicely!

    And yes I know who Michelle is, I just wanted to refer to it as a story, not Brian and Michelle. Cause its a great story idea. Original.
    May 25th, 2009 at 06:32am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Okay, I'd say I hate you for writing this... but that'd be a lie. Even though Brian died in the end, I loved this one shot.
    May 24th, 2009 at 01:25am
  • D. Dixon

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    whoa dude, that was intense.
    O_O
    but i freaking loved it!
    XD
    awesome job!
    May 23rd, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    i like it!but it wuld be more fun if you write it how she kill michelle to!but it's amazing!love it!
    May 23rd, 2009 at 02:44pm
  • Court_

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    Dayummm... that was good, really good in fact. The little bit of sexy time in there was done well and although it saddened me that she killed Brian, like others have said, the fact that she made Michelle her last kill made up for it. And really I think Brian dying made the ending beyond perfect. Great job hun!! <3
    May 23rd, 2009 at 08:45am
  • Just.Listen

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    Loved it..Even though Brian died..
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:42am
  • Synyer

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    oh my god, and that's the only thing running threw my head.

    seriously, killing Brian...thats depressing.

    but killing michelle in the end made up for it i suppose.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 05:27am
  • SynysterRose

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    Awesome one-shot! A bit sad that she killed Brian, but killing michelle kinda makes up for it XD
    May 23rd, 2009 at 03:14am
  • Bri Bri Sexy Time

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    its weird how everyone shocked that you killed Brian but Happy you killed Michelle also
    :tehe:
    I'm happy
    May 23rd, 2009 at 02:38am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I loved it!!!!
    I was sad that you killed bri but Michelle got it too so it was okay lol
    May 23rd, 2009 at 02:24am
  • Fast_Melodic

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    Ahh! I loved it! Even though you killed Brian. Killing Michelle made up for it 125%. :XD
    May 23rd, 2009 at 02:07am
  • The Dodger

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    AHHHH! SHE KILLED HIM!

    ...but, I really, really liked that. :omgno: And MICHELLE!
    God that was such a good twist.
    Loved it. :D
    May 23rd, 2009 at 01:57am
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