Let Me Shake Up Your World - Comments

I'm still in love with fictional Pete.
I wish I could give Pete a boner... :/
rofl.
Patrick Stump rhymes with hump!
again, rofl.
I am dork.
Update.
I want some more Pete/Maria! - Annie

I think I just fell in love with fictional Pete.
I don't have a good feeling about Nate.
Gabe, damn you and your caramel skin!
anyway, fave character is definitely Pete or Maria
Pete is sweet and Maria is, well, Maria.
I loved it. Update please.
I shall throw rocks at your virtu-window
and call you at 3 am until you do! - Annie

HAHAHAH AWESOME!
Well at least Alex was mentioned LOL!
That wuld be sooo funny lol.
Can't waut for more

lovelymegan:

Ambny:

AWESOME Update
<3
I love you too you make me smile lol.

You should put Alex in more. Casue Alex is my second favorite Cobra Member.
Haha =D

He's gonna be :D You just have to wait :]]]

But I'm such an impatient person! Lol
I liked the update =D
Of course Ryland saw the Hickey LOL
I feel so bad for Pete still

Hehe I love you too Megan =D
and I love You Katie

<3

Ambny:

AWESOME Update
<3
I love you too you make me smile lol.

You should put Alex in more. Casue Alex is my second favorite Cobra Member.
Haha =D

He's gonna be :D You just have to wait :]]]

AWESOME Update
<3
I love you too you make me smile lol.

You should put Alex in more. Casue Alex is my second favorite Cobra Member.
Haha =D

uh idk how tah do dis bhud da shimmy up da drain pip, again LOVE THAT CHAPTER!!! psshh if i was maria i wuld SO go 2 petes house EVERYDAY & sleep in his bed!!
x] ilu guys ur makin dis story AWESUM!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3
Poor Pete

Awww how sweet =D
Pete and Kacey made up and it was adorable!
<3
Awww I could so tell pete liked her hahah

Awww How uber cute =D
I kind of feel speical that I comment on this so much Haha.
Its like
Oooo look at all my comments =D

haha Idk

This story is my addiction =D
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I love you guys!

=D You are loved.

I loved your updates all 4 of them =D
I'm excited haha. I seriously love this no joke.

<3

Ambny:

Hahahah WOW...I laughed so hard Ilike cried.
Thats pretty funny. I am excited for the next update.
I'm seriously addicted

Haha, YOU MAKE ME FEEL LOVED >:]

Hahahah WOW...I laughed so hard Ilike cried.
Thats pretty funny. I am excited for the next update.
I'm seriously addicted

Aw How awesome!
haha I loved it. I like random conversations. =D

I can't wait for the next one...were apparently Pete is a perv....=P

haha you guys amaze me =D <3

OHH!!! Me Gusta! I want Gabe to help me with my Spanish =P
and Nate ...<3

Hahah I really liked it I can't wait to see what you guys do with this story.

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Favourite lines: Chapter One: "It's not my fault my brother happens to be one of the coolest guys in the school," she replies.

"Hey little sis!"

"Speak of the devil..," I mutter under my breath.
- - -I like how she totally just says that about her brother. I was like “Wow, that was really unexpected, I’d never say that about my brother…” but some siblings have that kind of relationship… lol.

AND

"Oh damn, you caught me. Should I confess my love to you now or later?"

"Oh, I would love to hear it now Pete."

"Hey, hey, hey. She's allllll mine, Wentz," Ryland jokingly says.

"Sorry boys, she's mine! Ain't that right, Suarez?"

"Yes, Kacey. You're my love."

"Awhhhhhh," the boys reply in unison, as she kisses me on the cheek.
- - -I like it, it’s cute. I just like scenes when things like this happen. I know they happen a lot when it’s in a friend situation, I mean, my friends do it ALL the time, but it’s always nice to hear people admit their ‘true’ feelings for you. Ha ha.

AND

Chapter Two: And I'm stuck in here, in this crappy Spanish class with no one to talk to. Not to mention the teacher won't speak to me in English.
- - -it’s so true. Every teacher that teaches a different subject refuses to talk to you in English… I think I’m gonna become an English teacher in Italy and force all the kids to talk to me in English, and if they don’t know a word, I’ll learn how to say ‘disctionary’ in Italian and they’ll all have Italian/English dictionaries and phrasebooks and be forced to look words up just to go to the bathroom. :D

AND

He was, at the very least, gorgeous. Really tall, over six foot. He's definitely Latino, shown by his tan, caramel skin. He was wearing black skinny jeans, with a green and purple plaid button up shirt with a bright colored t-shirt underneath it. He crossed the room,
- - -I was actually suspecting something along the lines of “and so I got up, walked up to him and shoved my head under his shirt. LOL! Just because of that one picture!

AND

"Hola, bastante," he said with a perfect accent.

"What? What did you just call me?!" I demanded, a little more rudely than I meant it to sound.

His eyes widened. "I-I c-called you pretty," he answered, unsure.

"O-oh." I felt my cheeks burn as I looked away from him.
- - - HA HA HA HA HA! ‘nuf said.

AND

Boy, did I have news to tell Maria.
- - -Ha ha, I just like when chapters end in something corny like that :)

P.S: WOOT! First comment!
P.P.S: I really hate this layout.. Change it?

LOVE YOU!
Sunny-Lee <3