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  • secrets-that-die

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    they're talking again!
    :)
    June 10th, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • Skarsgard

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    i'm going to give this a chance.
    unlike the previous one leading up to this, your grammer and puncutation is getting better.
    just don't get so down when people don't comment or anything, you should be writing because you want to, not because you want people to read it.
    June 10th, 2009 at 09:09am
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    Awww... So much crying! She gets Mikey back, but what about Alicia?

    Explaination on why I'm not on while you are: I'm always on at night||I'm babysitting from 2:30-6:45 or 8 pm, which sucks, and I'm always sleeping in the morning! LOL!

    So we should like... plan a time on where we can talk!
    June 10th, 2009 at 08:51am
  • maj10101

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    update pleaseeeeeeeeee
    June 9th, 2009 at 01:14am
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    NOOOOO! If you stop writing, I SWEAR! I WILL TAKE MY SWEET TIME WRITING THE NEXT CHAPPIE ON HALLELUJAH! (Wait... I already typed it... Well, I mean post!) LOL! Blackmail... O.O

    I LUFFS YOOH!
    June 7th, 2009 at 06:42am
  • Elaine Vox.

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    dont stop writing. this is really good. i love it!!
    June 7th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • maj10101

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    i finally get to read it mibba keeps kicking me off
    keep writing i can't wait anymore
    June 7th, 2009 at 03:03am
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    OMG! I think I know who the certain someone is... (One of the MCR guys?)
    Almost to the femmeslash....
    June 4th, 2009 at 02:14am
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    Okay, so you know everything I did on your birthday, but I forgot the obvious... STATE IT ON YOUR STORY COMMENT BOARD THINGY!
    So, I'm very sorry.... Forgive me?

    HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY!
    June 1st, 2009 at 06:14am
  • secrets-that-die

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    happy birthday!
    loved the update :)
    May 30th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • maj10101

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    love it still
    happy b-day!!!!!!!!!!
    how many chapters are there
    May 30th, 2009 at 05:14am
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    YESH! To all my nagging, you updated! Wait... Who's Cris?
    My GOD! It's about time they notice each other!
    May 30th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • maj10101

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    love it keep writing!
    May 29th, 2009 at 11:41pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    loved the update!
    Can't wait for more :]
    May 29th, 2009 at 10:07pm
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    *Looks at comment above*
    Wow... Isn't that my sig? OH WELLS! I LUFF YOU MY TWINNIE!

    And I am NOT RACIST EITHER! Holy sh--! I almost put tits in that word! Well, enough being perverted. I LUFF IT! You better promise that you'll make the next chappie! Because if you don't, I'll burn my fingers again!

    Scarlett: Such a Honey thing to do.
    Me: SHUT UP!
    May 29th, 2009 at 07:25am
  • maj10101

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    write the next chapter plz!!!!!!!
    Will you kiss me?
    Will You Kill Me?
    Or Will I Die Sleeping In Your Arms?
    ♥Every word Gerard sings♥
    ♥Every beat Bob plays♥
    ♥Every solo Ray has put his heart into♥
    ♥Every note Mikey hits♥
    ♥Every rhythm that has ever come out of Frank's guitar♥
    ♥Saved lives of thousands who didn't think they could make it♥
    ♥If you're one of the thousands saved, add this to your signature♥
    May 29th, 2009 at 12:09am
  • secrets-that-die

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    poor mikey and she's right there
    with their son
    loved the update
    can't wait for more
    May 28th, 2009 at 10:37pm
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    Even though it pains me to type, I luff you enough to work it out.
    I am so happy that you wrote the next chapter! YESH! So, you better update soon, gurly!
    Ahh.... The joys of being a mother... Getting left out in many things... LOL!
    May 28th, 2009 at 06:38am
  • maj10101

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    i love it write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2009 at 02:07am
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    Oh yeeeeesssshhhh! ^_^
    The sequel! (OMG! I'm in it!!!!!) Clap Clap
    May 24th, 2009 at 06:56am
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