Metus - Comments

Yes there is a sequel! lol I should have put this up a while ago, in case someone didn't know. Ah well. Better late than never!

Omg the best story I love it please keep writing it

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well its up to you to make a sequal or not, but i do hope you continue this story

gah!! bill should've gone in!!!

i lurvz it!! i got a little confuzled at 20-22 but then i re read it and it made sense again!! lol, don't mind me, my brain does funky things sometimes.

Nice update! The eye thing grossed me out, too, but it doesn't make me stop loving this story! :D
I stayed up last night reading all the Chapters from one to twenty-five and was happy when I saw you had Chapter six up! This is awesome! X3
Keep up the good work, can't wait for more!

i agree with tooconfused. it reminded me of a dream i had of my sister poking her eye out with a pen. *shudders* it wasnt a plesent memory/dream.

i'm excited for bills POV on this :D

Loved the new chapter, kinda sorta gross with the eye thing but also really funny, more please

I uffles you guys. ^.^ Thou hast pleased the gods of fanfiction-dom. ^.^

soooooooo.................................. wow. when this kid stepped in i was like wtf?! he's gonne ruin stuff. and i feel like i'm right. and the whole bill messaging adn saying he was coming in a few days and lor didnt know made me laugh cause it really does seem like something he would do. and i'm totally ranting, so i'll stop.

and in other words update more :D

I've just read the first Chapter and I think it's awesome so far! And I 'm happy I got 24 more to read! :D
I was kind of shocked when I read her likes and stuff. I like all of the same stuff completely - I 've even Dreamed of being a real writer one day! ^o^
Lol, and my Birthday is October 28th. I loved the Poem at the end! I'm liking it so far, so I need to read more! :D

Holly shit is he gonna like kill her or somthing! Wow love the story, write more please

YAY! You do love me! You updated! *glomp* But I'm bored again!

and as i continue to read you have a character who has my name and seems somewhat like me and apparently doesn't like coffee either. lol such serendipity.

and i really enjoyed that chapter. :D

well i would just like to say i have just read the first chaper and half way through i was like this is really good, it's one i will actually read. and then you go on to say that Lor's birthday is oct 2- my birthday. i died laughing at the coincidence.
so anyways im goin back to read the next few chapters. :D

Yes Ashley, I went there. I WENT THERE!!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!

Media Whore? REally?

:lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao

Yeah, Probably.

Hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!! That was funny! And I hate you for saying the pope! I haven't thought about that in like...4 whole days!!! Meany. *glares*

The one in LA. Or, Anaheim I guess, but it's near LA

Which Disneyland is this one in?