Out for Blood: A Billie Joe Story - Comments

Never get tired of it! :)

omg I love it. At first I thought 'this is so creepy, what the fuck?' but then I realized that the story is very good and you are a very good writer!

You are AMAZING writer!
Please write more stories!
I'm begging you! :D

I love the series!! I can't find any of your others (that aren't related to this) on here?

oh my gosh this was sooooo good! I'mma start reading the sequal as soon as I get back from school. :)

thid is different!
haha mike...

damn!!! mike seems like a good guy though

Well this is quite beautiful and I'm glad I decided to read it. You can be sure I'm subscribing to the sequel. (:

Okay, this is so sick and awful but somehow I couldn't stop reading.
It's pretty well written, but I do have one hang-up: somebody who has lost a lot of weight due to self-starvation does NOT maintain a 36C chest if her ribs and hipbones are sticking out so much. Also, if you don't eat for six months you die, simple as that. I would have liked to see some of Ellie's point of view about her not eating/the physical and mental consequences of starvation in the story. Its presence just seemed pretty trite to me.
Also I had a thought whilst reading this: I'm pretty sure Billie Joe would be so freaked out if he ever read this... ew. Poor guy.

I love this!
Very well done indeed.

I can't wait for the sequel. I cried at the end....I hate that she left Billie, even if it's for the best =/

Hurry up with the sequal woman! XD kidding.

Awh, that was a good ending!

AAAAH!
I'm super excited to see what happens next.
This story was absolutley wonderful.
I loved it soo much, but I bet imma love the sequel even more.

YAY!

Oh my God. I didn't expect her reaction to be that way at all. Whoa. I really liked it because even through all the things he did to her, she still loved him. She loved him enough to wake up in the middle of the night crying about not wanting to go. I really liked the end, and like Gryffindor_GreenDay2, message me too when the new story is up! Can't wait to read it!

Message me when the new story is up! I can't wait to read mote about Ellie and Billie!!!!!

woah,so didn't see that coming.keep uodating.

omfg!!!!!!
i cant berleive its over!!!!!
i lvoe the way it ended though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

NUUUU!!! damn it! haha, more soon? well I mean sequel soon?

O my god!! Im crying... well not really but... i could be crying right now!! Such a great story!!