Ok I loved this story, for the most part, the characters you created and the way in which you created them drew me in, like all of your others have done so far. But I do have one itsy bitsy thing to say...Angie, don't like her. Actually I did, up until the point when she slept with Davd to save Brian. Yes I know she had the best intentions by doing so, but she was only leaving it open for hurt and heartache down the line, which is exactly what happened. He came back and threatened her, and she slept with him again, only this time she dragged her best friend into it, or rather David did. I loved Stuart in this so that really crushed me when he found out Marcus was only part of David's plan. I guess I'm struggling with why Angie did it a second time, not that I wasn't upset when she did it the first. I mean what was David going to do other than move closer, and while yes that was a scary thought, she could have gotten the restraining order like she eventually did. She just wasn't thinking about consequences for her actions, and how many people that would be affected by her decisions to do as David asked. Even though David is far from innocent, I don't know, I get Angie was frightened of the guy, but she gave in too easily. And I may be more upset over the fact that she did that to Brain, who had been nothing but good to her throughout most of the story. But doesn't mean I wasn't pissed at him either. I think he should have taken a little more time than he did to think aobut things, once he found out everything, and this isn't referring to the baby, this is before. But Angie was so clingy and needy, I wanted to smack her and say woman up, you played a part, albeit unwillingly take the punishment. I think by this point I was so pissed at how she made herself out to be a victim, and I know she had been in the past, but she could have changed that and stood her ground in the present. Does any of this make sense, cause she has me so tied in knots, I'd have strangled her a few times if it were possible to do so. And even though I don't condone abortion either, I was on Brian's side on that. Like I said by the time it got to this point, I was over Angie and her woe is me card. Wow I'm gonna shut up now, but I will say I am glad they found their peace and happiness, even though Brian was the only one who deserved it., oh and Stu, him too!! Love you hon. <333
April 26th, 2011 at 10:01pm