Love Is a Losing Game - Comments

  • SynfulKisses

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    Ok I loved this story, for the most part, the characters you created and the way in which you created them drew me in, like all of your others have done so far. But I do have one itsy bitsy thing to say...Angie, don't like her. Actually I did, up until the point when she slept with Davd to save Brian. Yes I know she had the best intentions by doing so, but she was only leaving it open for hurt and heartache down the line, which is exactly what happened. He came back and threatened her, and she slept with him again, only this time she dragged her best friend into it, or rather David did. I loved Stuart in this so that really crushed me when he found out Marcus was only part of David's plan. I guess I'm struggling with why Angie did it a second time, not that I wasn't upset when she did it the first. I mean what was David going to do other than move closer, and while yes that was a scary thought, she could have gotten the restraining order like she eventually did. She just wasn't thinking about consequences for her actions, and how many people that would be affected by her decisions to do as David asked. Even though David is far from innocent, I don't know, I get Angie was frightened of the guy, but she gave in too easily. And I may be more upset over the fact that she did that to Brain, who had been nothing but good to her throughout most of the story. But doesn't mean I wasn't pissed at him either. I think he should have taken a little more time than he did to think aobut things, once he found out everything, and this isn't referring to the baby, this is before. But Angie was so clingy and needy, I wanted to smack her and say woman up, you played a part, albeit unwillingly take the punishment. I think by this point I was so pissed at how she made herself out to be a victim, and I know she had been in the past, but she could have changed that and stood her ground in the present. Does any of this make sense, cause she has me so tied in knots, I'd have strangled her a few times if it were possible to do so. And even though I don't condone abortion either, I was on Brian's side on that. Like I said by the time it got to this point, I was over Angie and her woe is me card. Wow I'm gonna shut up now, but I will say I am glad they found their peace and happiness, even though Brian was the only one who deserved it., oh and Stu, him too!! Love you hon. <333
    April 26th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • Odd!Aud!

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    Hey, personally, I don't blame Stu for trying to cop a feel while dancing with Matt. Anyone would. I'd do more than that if given the chance..."Sorry that I goosed you, these jeans are lint-magnets. I am helping you."

    Awww, happiness all around! I wonder what the sequel will be about....

    Is it about Ava? A search for her real dad? Hmmmmm....

    Awesome story! Can't wait to read the sequel. =}
    February 3rd, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aw that was such a sweet ending! I loved this story! <3
    November 5th, 2010 at 02:42am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    That was so freaking perfect! I'm going to miss this story, but thankfully I've got a few other of your wonderful stories to read :)
    November 4th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it! Sad that it ended..but beest story!
    November 4th, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Aww, that was so sweet. ^_^ I loved it! Great story, absolutely amazing! :D
    November 4th, 2010 at 04:41pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    so sweet .love it ty im kinda sad to see it end but happy with the way it did end :)
    November 4th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • itbemet

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    D'awww, that was sweet. Oliver? Fuck! *changes name in her own story and grumbles something that sounds like hussie under breath*
    November 4th, 2010 at 10:26am
  • Synfullytwysted

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    Awww, happy ever afters are always the best! That was an awesome ending, and I love how Brian accepted Ava as his too. I've loved this story as with all your others, and will miss it, but I know I have lots to look forward to with whatever you write in the future :) xx
    November 4th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aww super sweet! I loved it! <3
    October 25th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • D. Dixon

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    Awww. That was so cute. ^_^ I loved it! Congrats to them! Can't wait for the epilogue, even though I'm sad it's over. :[
    October 25th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Awww, this was a perfect ending! I'm so glad everything turned out for these two; I can't wait for the epilogue!
    October 24th, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • itbemet

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    I can't believe it's over! And my god, I was in hysterics at Stuart and Matt! It was great! Can't wait for the epilogue!
    October 24th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    aww i cant believe its over =(
    this really was a great story =)
    October 24th, 2010 at 05:24pm
  • Synfullytwysted

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    Awww, that was so lovely. I can't believe all that's left is the epilogue :( I've loved this story so much, as with all your others, and I can't wait to see what happens in the final part...and to start reading your new story :) xx
    October 24th, 2010 at 05:24pm
  • Synfullytwysted

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    A Vegas wedding..oh that's gonna be fun!

    Loved it, more soon :) xx
    October 7th, 2010 at 11:01am
  • riellybabie101

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    Sooo happy for this story!
    October 7th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Jimmy and Matt at the end of this chapter brought a smile to my pretty little face :) And I'm glad Papa Gates is accepting of everything; overall, awesome update hun :)
    October 7th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    aww this one was awesome!

    im glad everyone took the news well =)
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Aw! ^_^ I'm glad everyone's accepting of this! I loved the update! More soon. :D
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:01pm