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  • Regular

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    -insert obnoxious girly giggle-
    Oh my god.
    You HAVE to update!
    Jamie reminds me of my bestfriend...
    May 27th, 2009 at 06:00pm
  • Kolbs

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    update soon please x
    May 27th, 2009 at 01:55pm
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    Hrmm... I hate to be a story basher but I've got a few irks with this story.
    The description and title kind of give away the story, and there are a few grammatical errors in the chapter titles and in the speech; you need a full stop or comma at the end of speech (or a question mark/exclamation mark). Also, don't capitalise random words. One last thing - the characters on your description page are not your characters. I know for a fact. You can write them to be like that, but that doesn't make them your characters. If you correct this it'll really improve your story.
    (Also, if you didn't know, this is called constructive criticism - i.e., you correct that and your story is better.)
    Good plot idea though, I like it. =)
    May 27th, 2009 at 01:50pm
  • Nereid

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    dum dum dum dads walked in LOL! hehehehe cant wait to read the next chap! =]
    May 27th, 2009 at 09:36am
  • faithleilani

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    I really like the new chaps
    May 27th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • Synful Skittles

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    I wonder what her dad is going to say about that position......O_O
    May 27th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • Kolbs

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    please update again tonight xx
    May 27th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • Mikey's Dollface

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    thnku all I absolutley luv comments
    May 26th, 2009 at 11:55pm
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    dude, update soon please? X
    May 26th, 2009 at 11:53pm
  • Fall To Pieces

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    I likeee this =] It's awesome XD
    May 26th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • Nereid

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    love it ktk8! update soon xxxx =]
    May 26th, 2009 at 03:15pm
  • faithleilani

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    Loves it
    Cant wait for more!!!!Dance
    May 25th, 2009 at 11:39pm
  • Mikey's Dollface

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    thnku
    May 25th, 2009 at 01:33am
  • faithleilani

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    I still love it and Im happy that you are updateing it cuz of me and your 'silent subscribers' i hate people that do that too. Dance
    cant wait for more
    May 25th, 2009 at 01:15am
  • LubyLuu

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    Wow this is a really good story plz write more soon xx
    May 25th, 2009 at 01:12am
  • Mikey's Dollface

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    thnx guys u knw for subscribing... but COMMENTING wud be helpful
    May 25th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • Mikey's Dollface

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    thnku so much i will
    May 24th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • faithleilani

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    It sounds good, i want to read more.
    I hope this makes u update it tonight Dance
    *subscribes*
    May 24th, 2009 at 11:32pm
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