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  • somebody_who_cares

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    December 11th, 2009 at 06:06am
  • Tati.the.Strange

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    I don't really like 'Twilight' stories, but I really like this one. I do wonder who the man is though.. Well, update soon!!! = D

    ~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)

    P.S. Elwin = )
    December 3rd, 2009 at 04:14am
  • lisha-stories

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    Love the story so far; sorry about your keyboard.
    Hope it gets fixed cause this is an awesome story. Elwin
    November 29th, 2009 at 09:41am
  • Silver Rose

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    Elwin?....
    Anyway, I do like this story. The chapters aren't crap like you say they are, and I like them.
    Constructive critiscm: the sentences are a bit choppy and you need more description. It doesn't flow as smoothly as it could.
    I do like the plot line though and the character dialouge is good. Great job!
    November 28th, 2009 at 01:56am
  • cmhsharkgrl19

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    ELWIN!!!!! oh, and so sorry to hear about ur computer. hope u get it fixed soon!
    November 27th, 2009 at 01:33am
  • FindYourself

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    Love it. Cant wait to read more : )
    November 23rd, 2009 at 01:22pm
  • XxXBubblyGirlXxX

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    This is incredible my absolute favorite Emmet story yet!!!
    November 21st, 2009 at 07:03pm
  • Synful Skittles

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    Hey, good job. I just started reading tonight.
    P.S. I LOVE ELWIN!
    November 17th, 2009 at 04:00am
  • AngelDuckii

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    Please update soon!
    November 10th, 2009 at 10:19am
  • Alaynia

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    Elwin, Elwin, Elwin! (: Please put more up! This is definitely an interesting story and I'd love to see how it plays out.
    November 6th, 2009 at 11:11am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    I'm not really a Twilight fan-fic fan, and if I do read one it's about Edward. But this was good. Very suspence-fulishh. Me likes!

    Update please?!
    November 4th, 2009 at 02:38pm
  • WhisperTragedy

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    I'm not really a Twilight fan-fic fan, and if I do read one it's about Edward. But this was good. Very suspence-fulishh. Me likes!

    Update please?!
    November 4th, 2009 at 02:38pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    i love ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 3rd, 2009 at 01:43am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    yea Elwin
    its so i know who actually reads the authors notes
    and i my obsession with syn gates
    October 27th, 2009 at 12:20am
  • cmhsharkgrl19

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    oOoOoOoh! the mysterious man! uhhhh..... elwin??
    October 26th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • lirix

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    AH! Cliffhanger much?!?!? Update PLEASE! I've subscribed!
    October 26th, 2009 at 07:02am
  • Ella Bella

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    So I think we all knew Rosalie was a witch with a B but geese.
    Poor Noah, you just want to hug him.
    'Elwin'
    October 25th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • sporteegurl

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    i really hate cliffhangers. really really great story :)
    October 24th, 2009 at 07:06am
  • SynfulVengeanceXO

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    heyy i love it!!!!!
    u have to update soon!!!!!
    xo ashley
    October 21st, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • LittleFreak

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    lol, Elwin is a magical elf who will help me beat you with the stick if Noah get's hurt. Thanks for the dedication :D
    October 18th, 2009 at 10:36pm
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