I Wish This Was Different - Comments

  • FrankJScott

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  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Thank you for commenting. When I started writing this story I had no clue where I was going with it, and by the end I still had no clue. It is far from well written, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    October 31st, 2012 at 02:32am
  • celestial_royalty

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    Um...touching, weird and more than slightly confusing. What the fuck just happened?! There's an error I think in chapter one and seven, among others. One was "their" instead of "there". Or the other way around. Seriously, what the hell just happened!? My head is spinning and it's annoying. Interesting how Noah just accepted Emmett. I don't need to say that this is not a typical Twilight love story, which is nice. I like Marcus. I'm sure everyone who's read this, does.
    October 29th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • skinny:minni

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    i liked the story but no the end i wanted alley and emmett to end up togeather as a happy family
    April 10th, 2011 at 06:56am
  • k123456789

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    let it be known that this was an awesome story but the ending...that shit was just fucked up. I had to read like three times to get it and i cried when i did. again. awesome story but fucked up ending
    April 6th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • Error-00

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    is there ever going to be a sequel?
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    update pleeeeeeease
    March 28th, 2011 at 10:34pm
  • decendingdrakness

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    this is a very different story, and i love it. its so different from all the others and i drags you in even more from chapter to chapter! :D ~Jen
    February 13th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • Error-00

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    UPDATE!!!!
    i can't wait for the next chapter!
    :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 05:01am
  • emmared FMT!

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    I believe she just used her true power, the secret one only Alice and Carlisle know of. Or Noah used one of his powers. Someone used a big ass power.
    September 1st, 2010 at 12:43am
  • KillJoySynner

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    GAH! THIS IS FUCKING GOOD! I HOPE U POST MORE UP!
    August 19th, 2010 at 01:29pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    holy crap!
    August 15th, 2010 at 12:27am
  • jummaness

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    she goes all ninja vampire blood sucking whore on their arses? and actually bits rose in the arse? that i would like to read ahaha.
    August 12th, 2010 at 10:15am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    August 11th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • Joylinn

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    I think she just turned into the Hulk&whoops ass on miss rosie there. ;p
    August 11th, 2010 at 12:00am
  • Natsu

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    Update Please~!
    August 10th, 2010 at 01:35pm
  • Aaugustin

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    its really good keep on writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 10th, 2010 at 07:36am
  • SarahhhDarlinggg

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    that chapter definetly wasn't bad. it was cute and sweet :) and im gonna bother you until you update just like you asked :)
    August 2nd, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • willy ;

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    I love ittttttt :) update soon please! You left it off right when it was getting to that "OMFG" moment. I can't wait for the next update.
    July 31st, 2010 at 07:07am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    you're not horriable
    July 23rd, 2010 at 11:36pm