The Girl Next Door - Comments

I love thiss:):):) Hey are you planning on writing another chapter? (:

hahaahaha thanks flip i love yu

OMG!
I read this and went *shakes head* Zoe *sigh*
Like, even if I didn't know, I woulda been able to tell you wrote this :D
Not that it's bad. At all. I love it, actually (:
Just saying it's very...Zoe. Lol.
:)

i'm workin on a new chaptr

total.paranoia:

That damn bastard. >.< Lol. Aw, poor Emmie. The Emmie I know just broke her arm. :( So sad. Pshh. Who doesn't like waffles? I love those little dinner mints.. I could eat those for hours. Update soon, love! :D

i know!! i hate da bitch who did that 2 her!! aaaaaaah!! and ean found out!! lol is he gonna tell?? omg wat am i gonna make them dooooooooooooo??!! lol haha

That damn bastard. >.< Lol. Aw, poor Emmie. The Emmie I know just broke her arm. :( So sad. Pshh. Who doesn't like waffles? I love those little dinner mints.. I could eat those for hours. Update soon, love! :D

total.paranoia:

I like the chapters now that they're all bunched together. =) Oh, plays are fun to write! I'm good at one-shots, but I have these small ADD moments. >.> But, update soon!

hahaha i know what yu mean!! do yu like waffles??

I like the chapters now that they're all bunched together. =) Oh, plays are fun to write! I'm good at one-shots, but I have these small ADD moments. >.> But, update soon!

total.paranoia:

I know the lazy feeling. =) It's just like.... ugh... no, I just want to write gibberish in a big globby paragraph. Well, I love the story and all the characters. I encourage you to write more because all of these chapter are so well written. ^.^ Update soon!!

thx and seriously yu like it?? yea im not too good at keeping up with a story becuz im so used to writing short stories, plays, and poems. but i do my best. *grin*

I know the lazy feeling. =) It's just like.... ugh... no, I just want to write gibberish in a big globby paragraph. Well, I love the story and all the characters. I encourage you to write more because all of these chapter are so well written. ^.^ Update soon!!

I love it but the chapters need to be longer

hey thx. =) yea i kno all the formattin stuff im just 2 lazy 2 do it lol but thx for the comment =)

I like the start of this story. =) I like how it just jumps right in and straight to the point. I recommend going through this chapter and start new paragraphs after someone new talks - not one big paragraph. Trust me, it can hurt some people's eyes. =P Other than that, It's all good. Update soon!