It Seems I'm Too Far Gone - Comments

I love love LOVE this story so far. (:
I hope there's more to come?

Love this story still! :)

I don't know if I wanna read the next chapter...I just know it's not gonna end well :/
Lovely update :)

this whole chapter reminded me of graduation. I however was smart enough to wear my chucks with my dress hah.
anyway when they were going through the tapes was kind of cute and im glad billie showed up to see her graduate.
im anxious to see how moving goes for them.
update soon :)

this is getting good:) I'm so glad that you updated!

“I’m so glad you guys came,” Adrienne said, hugging them both.

“Well of course we couldn’t miss our little Adrienne’s- ooo tiny sandwiches,” Tre said, b-lining it to the first snack table. Adrienne laughed.
This made me laugh. Really hard. Its SO like Tre' to do something like this :)
I loved this chapter! Your writing seems to get better and better with each update! I'm excited for the next chapter, but I'm also sorta dreading the fact that she has to leave. I really hope that things work out for Adie and Billie because they seem so perfect. When you described them at the graduation I could picture Billie's face when he uncomforabley sat waiting for her in formal clothes. It made me smile :)

LOVED THIS. Awaiting more, soon I hope :D

Okay, so Ive only found this story 24 hours ago and it was so well written and has such a strong plot I stayed up til 4 a.m. reading...then passed out and picked up the final chapter tonight.
This story is abso fucking lutely awesome. I really hope you write another update soon because Ive fallen hard for this Adrienne, and the way you write Billie is amazing.
So...I hope that motivated you a little bit more :) I love this story a lot.

Sorry I only got around to reading this now!
But I'm glad that I did! I loved this chapter so much. You could really feel Adie's emotions, the way she was so confused with everything. I love how she took the day to herself to go to San Fransisco. It really added to the whole chapter, her realization. I loved it.

And second, HOLY FK. Thank you for the shout out! That meant ALOT!

Only just found this story.
I really like it and hope you can write more soon :)

Awesome updates :D I can't stop wndering now what happens next and how do they figure out the whole thing with her family and the university. And the title was really perfect for this chapter :)

"Adrienne sat up in bed and hesitated before she walked over to her light switch and flipped it on. When Billie Joe could finally see Adie, it wasn’t the unkempt hair or the disheveled clothes that made his mouth open. It was the red, sore, tear-stained eyes that stared back at him."

Naww, that let me know it was all gonna be alright. He loves her <3
That was beautiful. I'm glad they made up :)

That was the second best sex scene I've ever read. The first is only the winner because it involved my idol :P It was written in that same way, though a little more suggestive of certain activities taking place baha >.>
I prefer them written that way. I don't wanna hear the itty bitty details of what went where and for how long. :S It should be about the emotion and you reeeeally showed that.

That whole chapter created a clear image in my mind. I could picture his house, and the pyjamas he gave her, and then her walking down to put her clothes in the dryer. And then of course, the rest :P
It was just perfect writing :)

Again, your characters are SO believable. They're not perfect, and they're not so far from perfect that it's a joke. They build over time which is really important, I think. Adrienne and Billie are'nt who I thought they were at the start of the story, but they haven't changed one bit. It's like I've just come to know more about them, like real life people.

SHE WALKED HOME?! AFTER THAT?!
Oh damn. I hate cliff hangers. This is getting so damn intense, and I want to read more and more and more. And no, the sex scene wasn't terrible..it was pretty good lol. I loved this chapter..update when you can! :D

:( I want her to stay! lol

WOW. I have NO idea how I hadn't come across this story and read it already.
This is brilliant! I love Green Day fanfictions, and this one is just another to add to my favourites!
I always get so emotionally attached to characters in these types of stories. The last chapter almost brought me to tears, I hate it when people fight. And I sure as hell do not want Billie and Adie to break up. Man, they were so harsh to eachother...
Anyway. I loved this, so much. Update it if you can!

just started reading this yesterday and im liking it:) cant wait til you finish it!

Man, that was awesome :D

"Instead, he got up, cigarette in his lips, and put his hands behind his head, stretching. Adie knew this was something he did when he was avoiding speaking; when he had something he needed to say but either couldn’t or didn’t want to."

I loved that part :) It's so true to life, or something. Like, it's such a small detail but by including it, it gives the character so much padding ^_^

And that last part was just lovely. I'm glad they made up...in part.

=O This story is amazing! I was immediately drawn in by your Adrienne character being not just your average punk, and by how true each of your characters seem. I mean, I'd never think of Billie Joe as a cheater...but after reading this... =P
They just seem so genuine and I LOVE that these characters unfold over time, and that their relationships really do build.

At first I didn't like that Baily didn't really have a voice. It wasn't really said what kind of girl she could be and I found itt harder to judge everyone's characters due to this.
But, after reading further, I realised it didn't matter what she was like. I got the impression she was a kind, normal sort of girl, and liked that she didn't play a huge part in that part of the story in the end. It would have drawn the focus away from Adrienne's developing character.

Really, really love this so far and hope you plan on finishing this story =)

AWWWWEEEEESOME!!!!!!!
I am officially in LOVE with this story. Officially. Its official.
Her parents are dicks!
Anyhoozle...keep up the good work and update soon!

read this and didn't remember until chapter 3 that i've read it before. i have another comment from 2009 above *laughs* still a good story, even on the second time around.