Supernatural Blackhole - Comments

i like your style of writing! there are a few little typos and such that you might want to take an extra look at, but that's my just my OCD kicking in. :) great job.

AWWWWW CANTA WAIT TIL THE SEQUIL..... I CRIED WHEN CAY DIED.... UPDATE TO SEQUIL SOOOOON OK LOVE

IndependantKarissa:

Sassified Vada:

Well, I came up with that part. I believe that Astaroth, like every other demon, are controlled by their higher up who is Lucifer. So upon command, he must fight or die.

Besides, this is a story. A figment of our imaginations. So we write what we want to write that fits the story.

Ah okay sorry my feedback seems so negative all the time it's just that I research demonology amd stuff all the time so I'm like physco crazy with stuff having to be perfect. I don understand that upon commend he would fight though : )

LOL I'm sorry for getting irate about the comments. I understand about getting it perfect :D

Sassified Vada:

Well, I came up with that part. I believe that Astaroth, like every other demon, are controlled by their higher up who is Lucifer. So upon command, he must fight or die.

Besides, this is a story. A figment of our imaginations. So we write what we want to write that fits the story.

Ah okay sorry my feedback seems so negative all the time it's just that I research demonology amd stuff all the time so I'm like physco crazy with stuff having to be perfect. I don understand that upon commend he would fight though : )

Well, I came up with that part. I believe that Astaroth, like every other demon, are controlled by their higher up who is Lucifer. So upon command, he must fight or die.

Besides, this is a story. A figment of our imaginations. So we write what we want to write that fits the story.

Did you know that Astaroth is actually a very non violent demon if that makes sence. All he really likes to do is get information and tempt humans with it. . . . he's actaully not vbery violent in any demonlolgy books I've read. So why is he fighting in the story?

omg!! that was an amazing ending!!
so sad but really good!!
can't wait for the sequel! please update soon! =]
x

Hun, the pic is gone, you can get another one from my photobucket.

<3

Ha, she so liked that.
Btw, you posted that chapter twice.

Getting really interesting.
More? (:

omg! So Ellie didn't get Cay kicked out of heaven, he left by his own choice! She was only trying to do the right thing!

Me likey....

whooa.
interestinggg.

:O
write moree please! (:

O.O
oh noess.

mm, battling time.
sounds like a party.
woohoo (:

nooo!
cay you jackass!
ima go slap him for being stupid.

IndependantKarissa:

I LOVE SUPERNATURAL! Your story has an interesting plot, but sometimes I think you get things mixed up with Charmed or are stealing ideas from other shows. Like the occult book for instance that just seems too much like the Book of Shadows and in Supernatural the demons don't turn to ash they posess people and the people's bodies are left behind. Otherwise I think the plot is good I just think you should try to focus it only on Supernatural if you're going to do a fan fic.

As co-writer, I feel obligated to comment on this too.

We, Chris and I, both do research on this. Hence where the names of the angels come from and one of them Eiael aka Ellie, is the angel of the occult sciences and I think it would make more sense for her to carry around a big ass book than to keep all of it in her head since its apparent she can't remember anything about being an angel.

Besides, in the Occult, isn't it helpful to have a Book Of Shadows to remember and record your spells in? After all, I do have friends who practice Wicca and I should know a thing or two about it.

Now I would assume that since Lucifer is freed, the demons won't need to possess people anymore, hence the ash. Plus I'm sure in one of the episodes, a demon turned to ash or was killed in a different form or fashion than by just leaving the body. Besides, these demon's are a higher class and not your average demon, as I'm sure you've read.

But all in all, I'm glad you liked the story that we're both writing.

I LOVE SUPERNATURAL! Your story has an interesting plot, but sometimes I think you get things mixed up with Charmed or are stealing ideas from other shows. Like the occult book for instance that just seems too much like the Book of Shadows and in Supernatural the demons don't turn to ash they posess people and the people's bodies are left behind. Otherwise I think the plot is good I just think you should try to focus it only on Supernatural if you're going to do a fan fic.

hehe i love dean.
he makes everything interestingg. (:

whoaaa.
:O
more pleaseeee.
(: