Oh man, you made me teary! This was a good story and i'm sad to see it go. But this was genuinely touching and only you could've written something like this.
and so ends a great smutty slash between John and Paul. i can't think of anything to type into here other than you made me bawl for like two minutes. and i just *had* to listen to Here Today and Imagine for some reason. and i cried, thank you.
Oh. My. Fucking. God. i hate you and i hate Mark Chapman right now. now, i hate you in a way that i will be able to forgive you. okay? omfg i can't believe this is over and that it ended like this. JOHN! -cries-
Oh my god you made me cry. Let me tell you that's a lot more convincing than "Drag innit?" Now you can focus on your other 1,000+ stories that you oh-so-smartly posted before the others were finished! (jk I love you!) THANKS FOR YOUR HELP ON MY SMUT SCENE!
"Lad,no matter what.Don't ever feel alone.I'll be there with you,alright.Even if we're far away." oh my god that made me so so sad you have no idea. well, the whole thing did, but that part particularly. that was very, very good. he reacted just how i'd expect him to. you captured the whole scenario really well. i usually avoid reading stories that have john's death just cause i can barely handle it but i made an exception :p
oh no.. i want to know what happens but i don't cause of what's coming up :'( and you know what's kinda creepy? my mom and i were watching the mccartney years dvd, the video for say say say came on and my dad called like right at that moment to tell us michael had died. it was weird o_o
LMAO THAT PICTURE!! XD i love it. anyway, you did reeally good with the sex. it was really well written, and i love how paul originally said no but came back. that was cute :)
It was like John did a whole 360 .. that would mean he was back where he started, no? ahah but no otherwise it was good :) i wish it hadn't gone so fast, i love that era that it skipped over :p
there he goes again, paul the voyeur. (that makes no sense unless you're just reading this after our conversation lol) definitely looking forward to this intenseness :D
yay they meet :D i can't even think of something to say cause i just want to keep reading so i get to the hot parts :) if i were old and a man, i'd be a dirty old man. lmao.
so as usual i never find anything on time. the intro was great. it was like.. really, really good, real emotions and i'm gonna shut up and go read the rest now :)
What are you going to do if Paul reads this? I'm just curious... jokes i loved this one, I hope this isn't coming to an end. Linda took it better than I thought.