How to Make a Human - Comments

  • worldclass

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    So.....I don't want to be one of those people who randomly busts into your normal life like "oh my gawwwwwwwwd! Why don't you updaaaaaaaaaaaaate-ah?" so instead I'll tell you how awesomely hilarious your story is.

    I'm extremely bad with names, but you know that awesome-ass teacher in the class Ron is in? I want to see him again, eventually! And....I found hilarious lines in pretty much every chapter. My ultimate fave would probably be that whole scene where opa eventually says "it's selfish to think we care about his son." that part made me crack up SO BAD! I swear my pillow thinks I'm crazy now.

    I love Bobbie but i also felt kinda sorry for her because her life was pretty full of screw ups and people who were pretty mean/annoying to her. Like, really? Is her name that hard? No. Ou guys are just jerks.

    I loved when she yelled at Damien! *prays I got name right* I love to hate that guy in general. Such a dick but occasionally sticks up for Bobbie. And when Shane got inebriated...part of me thinks he was telling the truth, part is like "maaaaybe he exaggerated a bit." But I would like. Damien-Bobbie pairing eventually. As long as he stops being an ass. :)

    So, yah. It's a long comment....and I'm not going to whine about you updating. I will just subscribe and hope for the best :)
    February 6th, 2011 at 12:03pm
  • turducken

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    Hi, I don't even know if you're on this site anymore, are you? I haven't seen much activity, anyways, so I'm not even sure if you're going to read this or not, but I thought I'd give it a shot. No harm done, right? It's not going to be as detailed as I like, because I haven't read it in so long, but I hope it'll do. :D

    Well, to be honest, I read the last chapter posted like... a month ago? Maybe more, I'm not really that sure. I didn't comment though, I don't know why. I honestly read this thing entirely in two sittings. Which is pretty big for me, considering I get distracted so easily. It's actually crazy.

    At first I thought this was merely just a little quirky, I'd read your story (the one with the really bitchy chick and the not-gay hairdresser dude who's name... started with a B? I think it was a B. Bravery? I'm not sure, my memory sucks) and decided I'd give this one a look because the other one I really enjoyed.

    Most honestly? This is sincerely one of the funniest stories I've ever read on Mibba, and I'm not even lying. When I think funny, I think this story. I mean, usually people try for funny by putting the most random thing that comes to their mind, but you've got a smart humour that I love. It's really... clever.

    Bobby is lanky and awkward as hell, but you make it work for her. She isn't one of those girls that just mope all day because they aren't perfect, and she has that sarcastic thing to her that make me laugh. But she has worries just like the rest of us girls do, which makes her sort of relatable to anyone. When she was wondering whether or not Shane and Demetri were her friends, and all that. It just makes her more... real, to me.

    Shane is undoubtedly my favourite character- probably to most people too. I mean, he's just one hilarious fucker. And that's that. He keeps talking and talking and I've honestly laughed out loud at some of the stuff he says. When he got high, lord. I couldn't stop laughing at what he said, his pep talks are just pure gold.

    Demetri to me I think is one of those people that likes people but won't admit it, sort of has this wall up like he's better than everyone else but he sort of... won't admit it that he's not. Which is why he gets all pissy when she brings it up.
    I'M STILL VOTING FOR DEMETRI AND BOBBY TO HAVE SOME SEXY TIEM, JUST SAYIN'.

    And the ginger kid.
    I can't, just thinking back to him. He was hilarious.

    But yeah, just wanted to say, it's a really great story. Not sure if you've abandoned it or something, but I just wanted to let you know that I still really like it.
    :D
    January 31st, 2011 at 01:40am
  • brinarox1281993

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    I love this. Its quiet honestly the funniest thing I've read in the last couple of months and I do believe this story just made my day. Thank you!! update soon!
    January 18th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    I love this story. I read the first chapter a while ago, forgot about it, remembered yesterday and spent the whole of last night/this morning reading the whole thing so far. There's so much depth to the characters and I can really relate to them. Plus, you have a fantastic sense of humour. ;D I was reading the part where Bobbie went on the rollercoaster and hit Derek's brother at about 2am and I'm pretty sure I woke up the entire household with my laughter.
    December 29th, 2010 at 02:44pm
  • midsummer rhapsody

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    I LOVE your story!

    It's so darn hilarious, and the characters--even Ron--are likable in their own ways. I hope you update soon. I read all 25 chapters in one sitting because I couldn't stop reading.
    December 23rd, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • still a secret

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    I'm so happy you updated! :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • Natka

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    Hmmm cool. I'm super glad you updated.
    I must say, that when I checked in on this story (yes super stalkerish I know) I was seriously surprised to see another update.
    Well, I still love it. Bobbie is hilarious.
    I miss Shane though :( Even though he was only in like, the last chapter.
    December 12th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • lala1234142

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    WOOOT! UPDATE! ooooooh! I feel as if Bobbie will royally screw up her job when her secret lover comes... ::wink wink::

    good luck in college!
    December 9th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • WarDrums

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    yay you updated! awesome chapter =P
    December 8th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • ArgonXRoses

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    I laughed out loud so many time, i got weird looks. :P
    Congratulations with college and hopefully it won't be too busy.

    more soon please! <3
    December 8th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • southpaw

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    I flailed out of happiness when I was notified of an update. Just saying. And I'm looking forward to reading about Bobbie's new job. :D
    December 7th, 2010 at 11:24pm
  • lala1234142

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    PLEASE UPDATE!!!

    I was laughing hysterically! Your story is definitely amazing. Not may people can write humor.
    November 28th, 2010 at 09:35pm
  • folk you please

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    This literally makes me laugh out loud.
    And seriously, the part about diarrhea had me cracking up.
    It was really gross but it made total sense.

    Update soon.
    November 20th, 2010 at 04:56am
  • SolarTaco

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    I really do think you should update sometime soon:D
    November 18th, 2010 at 04:35am
  • MarmaladeK.Gnome

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    UPDATE!!! hahahha a wonderful story full of charisma
    November 13th, 2010 at 05:39pm
  • never quite awake.

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    Sorry, so clueless. My comment looks bad... :(
    October 28th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • never quite awake.

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    [color= #9933ff] Quite amazing... Exceptionally funny. Excpeptional in particular.
    October 28th, 2010 at 10:40pm
  • sweet clementine.

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    Extremely funny and well written. Good job!
    October 26th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • DontFallJustFly

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    I love this story. I would buy it in a book store. Bobbies Oma and Om-pa are hilarious. Your style or writing is both fresh and slightly offbeat (in a good way. I love the way you phrase things!) I read the whole story about an hour, and there were time I had to try to control my laughing fits so I wouldn't wake up my mom!
    October 24th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • Natka

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    Finished!!
    Okay, so I am totally freaking addicted to this totally freaking awesome freaking story!!
    I love it really, and you seriously need to update!
    I am dying, and I only just finished it!
    October 21st, 2010 at 10:15am