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  • EvilMonique

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    It was my absolute pleasure.
    And thank you, the chapter made me smile and I needed it.
    I'm really excited about where this is going.
    Great update. More soon? ;-)
    January 9th, 2010 at 09:10pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    haha That's better then the ending i was writting- for the life of me i could not think so i kept erasing parts and now i cant get past the last chapter i posted. <3
    Hmmmm Well i guess i can forgive you this once since it's the computers fault -_- happens to me all the time.
    January 2nd, 2010 at 05:43pm
  • EvilMonique

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    Of course it's a good story! But make the next chapter the end but put something promising in like jace asking her out or a new potential boyfriend or something like that and then begin with the sequel. Anyway just an idea for the ending.
    And you know I love your story, I'm just sorry that I haven't commented but my computer crashed so that gets me a get out of jail free card right???!!! hahaha
    January 1st, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    <3 I want to give Jake a happy ending too, but i dont know who to put him with!
    I'm going to tie this all into a story for their tenth grade year, maybe Jace'll smarten up then and she can have a best friend and a boyfriend XD
    <3 I will update as soon as my brain starts working again <3
    <3 Megan
    November 27th, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • xSmilingInsanityx

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    I love the story so far!
    ♥You must keep going :]
    She really needs to end up with Jace..♥
    I think Jake should end up with another girl or whatever so he gets to be happy to and they get to be best friends again and then Jace would be her boyfriend and yada yada..♥
    :] Thats just what I think!!
    Your story is really inspiring.
    ♥♥♥ Write more soon!! ♥♥♥
    November 27th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • Awkward Turtl3

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    I really love this story. I've fallen in love with the characters. I'm new, and this was one of the first stories I started reading it's my favourite so far. =] keep writing!
    October 12th, 2009 at 08:50am
  • EvilMonique

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    I'm glad that you love me, it does wonders for my self esteem. ;-)
    I hate it as well when people can't comment.
    Honestly it only takes a minute or two...
    Update soon...
    October 9th, 2009 at 06:06pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    yea...*hides behind book* i hate them to but it seems the best method on here...
    i'm mostly updating on weekends cause of school
    All will be revealed...sort of, just hang in there =)
    <3 Megan
    September 17th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • EvilMonique

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    You should know that I hate cliff-hangers with an unadulterated passion compared to no other...
    It was a great chapter though, even if I wish I knew what was going on... (hint hint)
    But I will wait like a good girl for the update.
    ;-)
    September 16th, 2009 at 07:19pm
  • EvilMonique

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    I'm glad that he came out and comforted her.
    He's such a sweetie pie...
    Wish the guy of my dreams could be that understanding.
    Update soon...
    September 8th, 2009 at 04:04pm
  • EvilMonique

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    W.O.W!
    I wasn't expecting that...
    But definitely keep going.
    ;-)
    August 30th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    my weekend was way to short- school is evil!
    haha yea but you just have to love them...most days
    August 25th, 2009 at 12:03am
  • EvilMonique

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    My weekend was great! a little short though... Have I mentioned that I hate school?
    A sequel could be good, I think.
    I know exactly what you mean by the guy friend and opening up and everything. My best guy friend does the same... Men! Hehe.
    August 24th, 2009 at 08:23pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    yea im still working out the ending though, but i think im going to make a sequel...
    any who- have a good weekend to
    thanks for the comment :D
    August 22nd, 2009 at 03:25pm
  • EvilMonique

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    Jace is an asshole, but I can see why she's inlove with him.
    I really wish though that Jake could have been the one for her.
    Anyways loved it... have a great weekend
    August 22nd, 2009 at 12:01pm
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    Scars.For.Life:
    Okay. Why does it say I rolled her eyes. Or something I then her?
    o my bad- keep switching between first and third person because im writing a different story at the same time
    i'll go fix that
    thanks
    August 9th, 2009 at 03:28pm
  • Scars.For.Life

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    Okay. Why does it say I rolled her eyes. Or something I then her?
    August 9th, 2009 at 06:04am
  • Bleeding-Black333

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    EvilMonique:
    Thank you so much for re-writing the chapter. I seriously appreciate it.
    I really, REALLY want to know what Jake is keeping from her.
    Update soon... :-)
    I'm glad i could clear it up, after i reread it i was sitting there staring at the screen- i had confused myself lol. I'm working on the next chapter, but sadly im heading back to school, so i dont know how much time i will have.
    <3 MEgan
    August 9th, 2009 at 02:23am
  • EvilMonique

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    Thank you so much for re-writing the chapter. I seriously appreciate it.
    I really, REALLY want to know what Jake is keeping from her.
    Update soon... :-)
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:02pm
  • FMLYHM Zacky

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    awesome so far
    August 8th, 2009 at 08:10pm