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  • junior

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    LOLIVER FTW.
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    it was really good. :D
    just one thing...
    you spelt "defenseless" wrong. :cute:
    other than that... it was awesome. :D
    June 18th, 2009 at 12:39am
  • Fergilo

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    I like hate Hannah Montana, but this was great!

    I absolutely loved it! Oliver and Lily are a really good match.

    I'm glad I read this, I haven't read good oneshot in a while.

    : )
    May 29th, 2009 at 08:24pm
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