I love stories that are senseless potty humour adding to my literary diet. :D
July 17th, 2009 at 07:07am
Pour Le Story/Review Game
:XD :XD :XD :XD :XD :XD :XD
:lmfao :lmfao :lmfao
Ok, now I've got that out of my system so I can give you the actual review.
I loved this. We need more of these around here. Just, lighthearted silly pieces that make you feel good. I thought it was very creative and cool. Seriously, boredom brings out the best in you.
I laughed so hard at the run on sentence. And the whole "it's indescribable" thing. I was a little confused because you mentioned toilet humor and I was like "but there's no toilet humor...." and then Zippy's secret was revealed! =O *dramatic music*
God, you're awesome :XD
I liked the way you phrased it though, "powerd by beans". Tis a pwnsome phrase. I actually liked the whole thing. I was expecting some magical eyesight restoring thing, but the contacts thing caught me off guard. See-Right FTW!!!
This whole thing just made me smile so much. So thank you for writing it. I really hope you have more comedy pieces because I'd love to read them.
And if you want more feedback/criticism/a longer review on this story, please PM me. :cute:
Once again: :lmfao