Fall Away - Comments

will you be continuing with this story? because i really like it and would love to see how it ends

This story is beyond amazing. I love it. HURRY AND UPDATE FOR CHRIST"S SAKE. Really, it has me on the edge of my seat.:)

Heyyy, totally missed this story =( but I'm really glad it's back =)

I'm really happy Danny didn't die, I love him, he's adorable. And I'm happy for Ellie too =). I miss Kirian though. I really feel like he needs a hug so he should get one next time he's in the chapter.

And I can't believe you witnessed a car-crash =| I hope you're okay. I'm sorry about the boy that died =( xx

:O Jeez! That would suck so much… I mean… That would just be such a weird experience. Even if you didn't know the person. I can't imagine.
So I feel for you. And the guy's family. :(

And this sort of ruins the vibe, but I'm majorly looking foreword to another update.

Aw, he's just depressed-helpless, not even pissed. :(
I'm nervous about what's gonna happen now. This chapter was definitely combustion-inducing. UPDATE SOOOON!

I love this so much. It's fantastic and reminds me hevily of Stephen King's 'Insomnia' but not so much to be bad.I can't wait to read more!

Haha okay.
I thought it was just kirian talking... Well thinking
we shall see...
Good job! :)
UPDATE SOON!

I didn't see it coming..
But I think that later he's gonna be like "why did you think I would ruin it for you?"
or something like that lol
great job!!!
:)
I'm glad Danny's coming for a visit
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

so you're back
for realllz
back ??
xDDDDD

Oooooh, that was dramatic.
I'm now picturing Kirian in a tuxedo sitting on a leather chair behind a big desk in a dimly lit room stroking an ugly, fluffy, white kitty like a cartoon villain. Even though he's not a villain.
XDD Don't ask.

You do make it seems like he could just go and decide "Hmm. This boy is on my list, AND he's on a plane! I think I'll make him die today…"

I bet Kirian's gonna be pissed Ellie made that call though. Either that or he'll be pissed-depressed-helpless and not just pissed. x)
Either way I'm looking foreword to it. (:

Good job
:)
I wonder what will happen at the boys house...
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Yes. You DO suck. Although updating definitely helps even that out. x)
I want something big to happen soon. And I also have a feeling my wish will come true.

It amuses me how Ellie is all nervous alone, but when someone comes along she tries to be all blasé… she needs to open to people sometimes. :\

Girl, you are fast approaching the horrible updating habits I have. Not good. I am displeased. :\
Wow, is that a word? 0.o Spell check's not showing up…

Yay for fights! I have some strange obsession with reading fights. They're like…
There are no words to describe it. Only a smily face that will not be there can cover it.

Haha. Ellie's attempts at lying are kind of hilarious. x)

And OH MY GOD, Soren is a STALKER. I knew it! He appears magically in her apartment? WEIRD.
He's lucky he has a cool name… ;)
Unlike Scott.

btw, way to drop those links! XD I'm proud of you.

AMAAAAAAAZINGGG!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
i LOVE it!!!
twas beautiful!
and wonderful
and fantastic in soo many ways.
LOVED IT!
UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good job!
i missed getting your updates... D:
but im glad they are back
Kirian is better...
thats good. :)
but cliffhanger.. D: D: D: D:
AMAZING JOB!
UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great update, even if it was short =) I'm just glad it was updated. I'm so excited about Kirian coming to her front door =D. I wonder what's going to happenn....

Update soon! =) xx

no i hatee cliff hangers and along with that i hatee shorttt chaptersss!
:(
hurry up and updatee again ive missed this story!

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That was me combusting. You've actually done it this time x).

I'm super glad this is back, but at the same time, I'm pissed. I get my nice, wonderful update, but… URGH! This is going to make me rip up cute stuffed animals or something. The anticipation is heightened by how long it's been. I honestly would have rather had a filler. XDD
But I'm not writing the story and I'm not in charge of how far between the updates are, so blah. Wish I was.
You better update SOON to make this up x).
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All prejudice aside, though, it was good. It made me feel super super bad for Kirian and Ellie. Stupid him-being-the-impersonation-of-death getting in the way of their love! DX

REALLY GOOD STORY!!!!!!!
keep writing :D