honestly i think your doing a great job and i love that your incorporating Finnish, its very original anyway dont worry about being cliche just write whatever feels right and im sure everyone will love it =D
x] it's nice to see another villie story ^-^ i thought the Finnish in it made it even more 'alive' so say, and i liked just how the general story seems to be going... keep writing it! :]
in that case I would like to know...