These Next Nine Months - Comments

  • lynne1988

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    Awe, Adam being all embarrassed is ADOREABLE!!

    And seriously Patrick, asking the waiter to melt the cheese was like one of the sweetest things ever.

    I think the picture thing is a really cool idea, and Adam's impromptu vacation sounds quite romantic.

    "Eager lost a bet," made me LOL, and I giggled at the end too when he was like "I'm your bf until Patrick comes back."

    Oh dear. I hope Patrick's grandpa is okay!!
    June 17th, 2009 at 05:56am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Oh, this should be interesting, with Ben being her "boyfriend" haha. And, I'm wondering what is up with Adam not telling them about this trip with Lily! I can't wait for more!
    June 17th, 2009 at 05:51am
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    Love love love this story. I got hooked on the original and was so psyched you decided to do a sequel. Patrick Sharp is seriously like the perfect man! Can't wait for more!
    June 12th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • alyssa-anne

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    That latest update is hilarious. have I mentioned how much I love when Sharpie calls her "momma." That is just so swoon worthy. And I love all the shirts Burr gets her. This story is just amazing.

    AND I posted Duncan Keith. It's called Letting Go of the World Around Me,

    ;D
    June 12th, 2009 at 04:37am
  • hola19

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    aww that was so cute the last part i love them together it would be funny if she got girls lol keep up the great work
    June 11th, 2009 at 10:21pm
  • lynne1988

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    Lmao, that Uncle Burish shirt was great!

    And omg. That was the cutest thing I have ever read! I was swooning too! Ah jeez. Patrick is such a stud. Oh, and the thing with Burish being from Canada was classic! haha

    And I like Burish's girl, she seems really cool. I agree with Erin, it will be nice for Ana to have a girl to hang out with once in a while, lmao!
    June 11th, 2009 at 08:59pm
  • westcoastwinter

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    That was the cutest damn thing ever, haha! But, I'm loving how she still gets onto Adam about being from Canada. And, those shirts of his are freaking hilarious. And, I'm really liking Lily so far, hopefully everything works out between those two. It might be nice for Ana to have a girl friend. I'm looking forward to more!
    June 11th, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • broken sticks

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    I love how their relationship is -- just so fun and quirky. Patrick is absolutely adorable. I cannot believe they are having twins; but, I love that he thinks that they will both be boys. His impulse buy of purchasing a house for the two of them was lovely. Adam is hilarious -- I love his comedic effect =] And his girl seems lovely. I look forward to reading more from you! (As I seem to have grown to love your style of writing. Oh and just so you know, I really really like The French Connection also. I just have been typical me failing at commenting).
    June 11th, 2009 at 09:30am
  • roxy278

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    omg so cute with the babies kicking! i love the new shirt adam gave ana!
    June 11th, 2009 at 08:44am
  • katiedontcry

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    loved this one!
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:06pm
  • rockstaar.

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    Haha, Adam found a girl! For some reason I found that really amusing.
    I'm loving this story, and I'm so excited Patrick bought them a house! It's so cute!
    June 5th, 2009 at 02:46pm
  • scute

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    I can't get enough of this story!
    it was so cute he naught the house for them, gahh love it :)))
    June 5th, 2009 at 01:44pm
  • sukiedancer21

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    I loove that he bought the house weeks ago!!!
    June 5th, 2009 at 10:11am
  • georgii

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    There is SO much I love about this story. Patrick is just perfect, there's no other way to describe him.
    He bought the house weeks ago! Wow. I love him.
    And Adam has a girl, yay! He'd better not fuck up.
    And also, I was lauging loads at many parts, but the part where you wrote about his parents chatting up her grandma. Over here, chatting someone up is what you do when you want to get in their pants, haha.
    June 5th, 2009 at 09:15am
  • lynne1988

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    "She knew I wanted to devour my plate, just like she knows everything else." --I don't know why I found that as funny as I did, but I could NOT stop laughing, lol.

    And okay. Wtf is up with Patrick's parents?? Jerks.

    Patrick is seriously like, THE PERFECT MAN. Telling his parents to fuck off, (in less graphic terms), following her into the bathroom, BUYING THEM A HOUSE. *sighs*

    And oooh, Burish has a giiiirrrrrl =))

    Love it!
    June 5th, 2009 at 08:25am
  • broken sticks

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    Sooo I know I fail because I don't usually comment because your story is just so adorable I just get this stupid little smile on my face. Patrick is so adorable in this story. So cute. Again just thinking about it I get the stupid little grin on my face. I love that he bought the house for the two of them but was nervous. Adam is hilarious. I'm glad he got a girl. The parents were a bit of a fail there... I dunno what's up with them. Love this :]
    June 5th, 2009 at 08:16am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Aw, that's incredibly sweet of Patrick to buy the house! And, I'm wondering what's going on with his parents. I'm sure they're going to come back, and I'm thinking it's not going to be a pleasant trip, haha. And, yay, Adam got a girl =)
    June 5th, 2009 at 08:10am
  • alyssa-anne

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    *SWOON* He bought the house weeks ago!? Oh my god. Do I also have to mention that every time he calls her 'momma' I die a little. (In the most wonderful way.)

    And Adam! He met a girl! I am so happy for him. Should be interesting to see where that goes.

    Sucks about his parents, though

    OH! And I decided when she gives birth to these twins. TWO. GIRLS.

    :D
    June 5th, 2009 at 08:05am
  • sukiedancer21

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    Aww burish needs a girlfriend haha. Anyways cant wait to see what the parents want. =)
    June 5th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • georgii

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    Hmm, this whole dinner with his parents thing seems fishy to me.
    But twins! Aww, yay! And I love how Burish wants a girlfriend, and fry bread with sugar.
    June 4th, 2009 at 07:08am