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  • manderz9511

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    i just found your story and it is amazing!!!
    you need to update like asap!!!(:
    August 13th, 2009 at 08:17am
  • xSmilingInsanityx

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    You NEED to write more!!
    July 10th, 2009 at 04:59pm
  • denise.

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    One word.
    Amazing. (:
    Keep up the good work.
    July 8th, 2009 at 11:55pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    July 2nd, 2009 at 01:26am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Update, bitch!!

    Or I shall come and rape you! M'kay!!!

    lol... =D
    June 22nd, 2009 at 02:03am
  • EscapingTheFate

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    I love this!! Can't wait for for
    xox Tiffy
    June 16th, 2009 at 02:22pm
  • chance.:i:.took

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    so, i officially love this story. :) keep writing please!!!!
    June 14th, 2009 at 08:56pm
  • chance.:i:.took

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    so, i officially love this story. :) keep writing please!!!!
    June 14th, 2009 at 08:56pm
  • fooleish

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    I love this story. It's amazing!
    June 14th, 2009 at 05:16pm
  • iwantyoudead

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    I think it would be excellent if you fast forwarded the story a few months, to see where he is in his mind about his dad, which was completely messed up! I can't believe it! BUt it would be interesting to see what is going on a few months ahead!!! Can't wait for the next parts!!!!!
    June 8th, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    yup fast forward!
    UPDATE! :]
    June 8th, 2009 at 06:40am
  • Ri0t

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    that would be koolio!
    i fucked a mermaid!!!!
    haha. im on a boat. i love dat song.
    good story!
    June 6th, 2009 at 11:13pm
  • Odd!Aud!

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    Great update, as always. Scarlett and James are so cute together.
    I wouldn't mind if it was fast-forwarded a couple of months. If it helps you write faster, go ahead! haha.
    =}
    June 5th, 2009 at 05:19pm
  • Settling For Less.

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    SOOOO GOOD <333 AHHHHH<333333
    June 5th, 2009 at 04:45am
  • Friday Im In Love

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    Hey , thank you for reading my story and giving me a link to this very good story. I say keep writting, I love it.
    x
    June 5th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • Neche_Girl8

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    I love this!

    Its also awesome how the bad boy wasn't some poor dude like so many other storys.

    He seemed more real at the fact that he was rich & liked his mom.

    As weird as it is it made him more realisitic (sp?).
    June 4th, 2009 at 09:40am
  • LeandraLoco-motion

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    I reeeaaaallllly like this story.
    I always appreciate an original fiction because thats what I write.
    I especially like this one becuase it's cliche but it's totally not at the same time.... if that makes sence
    Fast forwarding a couple of months would be cool, I want to see how Scarlet and James' relationship progresses.
    Oh and poor James, he's like a pinapple, all rough edges, but sweet on the inside. :]
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:53am
  • cynicalqueen

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    No, he can't think like that! Scarlett loves him!
    June 4th, 2009 at 03:05am
  • xSmilingInsanityx

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    I think it would be cool if it fast forwarded Nyam
    June 4th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • AlyssaRaymondImari

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    poor james, he feels so baaad! <3
    June 4th, 2009 at 02:50am