Blossom in the Tree - Comments

I honestly love this.
And it's just like a breath of fresh air from all the other fan-fics with the same plot.

Brilliant job. :)

oh wow. At first I was a little confused where this was going, but as I came towards the middle-end it blew me away.
I love the meaning behind it and how you incorperated the pen object. It was so unique and instead of using the pen as a inadimate object you used it more as a symbol.
Brilliant!
As some constructive critsim look a little bit on the grammar and repetition, but otherwise a magnifcient story! well done