Crash and We'll Collide - Comments

i like....the chapters are fine.....im enjoying it. it could use a lil more discription.....

No where near as good as "My scars are yours today". But then again i'm biased lol
It was a good read although the writing style was abit plain, and could have perhaps used some more description. But other than that i had no problems with it. ^_^

I'd like to see how she's going to manage to hide the fact that she's pregnant from everyone. I like her reaction to going on tour as well, it seems more realistic with the fact that she's pregnant and all. I also find it cute how they all seem treat her like a little sister as well, i'd love to see how the relationships develops between everyone and her :cute:

On another note: Your writing's really progressing, i'd kill to have talent like you Beth :arms:

I'm not sure how to start this. Yay you technically updated/ posted a new version of an old story

I really like the start, it seems more complex and gives us a little more detail into her life and how it all started from the conception ect. I can't wait to see it unfold and how she'll deal with pregnancy and tour life. All in all, it's a promising start m'dear and I can't wait to carry on reading more of it.

Cash Cash are going to be in it -yays- :XD