It was written very nicely. A very cute love story. The flashbacks were awesome as well. I had a huge grin and started giggling when she saw him awake. Now just wait for the other contest entries
aww that was so cute when she woke up and saw him awake I was smiling like an idiot I loved all the flashbacks He wouldn't have had to ask twice for that kiss though (If it was me)
I think my Zacky vengeance crush just came back -___- the story was so cute, I absolutely loved it and the flashbacks were so sweet, I kept smiling the whole time and I like how it's written :) Very nice